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The Elephant Bee

An elephant bee zoomed around my head I had maniacal thoughts, wished him dead. His buzz annoying Never enjoying Traitorous roses loved him, turning red.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/10/2020 6:43:00 PM

G’day Caren … did you feel the sting as well - thanks Caren - Lindsay

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2020 6:52:00 AM

Not that time but other times.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2020 6:45:00 PM

A love hate relationship!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:50:00 PM

Always.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/9/2020 3:35:00 PM

Great descriptive poem. I don't like flying bugs :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:50:00 PM

I am tired of them myself.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2020 3:30:00 PM

Barklay's name just came to me (from my poem) I think his last name was Wright. Wish I knew how to know if he were alive or dead. Not good with finding things by google search!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:51:00 PM

Hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2020 3:29:00 PM

oh how cute, the part about the roses!!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:51:00 PM

They would like him.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2020 3:14:00 PM

I found an 'elephant beetle' online. It's pretty scary looking, and it looks like it should be named an 'elephant bee?' Were you referring to that?! ~ Red Rooster

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:51:00 PM

I created my own elephant bee, not knowing there were elephant beetles at all! Thanks for the info.