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The Coven

Why brought they flowers to a witch's grave With greening foliage and color bursts, With drab, dark pigments that white lilies save? Nail tight the coffin, Lest we all be cursed. Atop the new grave, the bouquet was laid. By morn the flowers have withered to black. Wafting of chants on wind's organ is played, While gale of rebirth is calling her back. The scent of perfume has become hot steam Where heat of the day swelters the foul ground. Escape impossible! So it would seem. Yet casket's empty and witch is unfound.

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Date: 10/25/2024 11:02:00 AM
Wow how interesting witches and empty coffins. Scary, scary when they're on the prowl.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/26/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thank you and ...Happy Halloween.
Date: 10/22/2024 10:46:00 PM
Casket is empty. This single line is enough to send shudders through the whole body. The bouquet laid on the grave turned to black and the scent of perfume changed into hot steam. What a spooky tale, Hilda.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/22/2024 11:37:00 PM
As intended. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 10/12/2024 3:09:00 AM
Oh a witch one. Very imaginative Hilda and nicely rhymed. I guess the reader's mind will go into a 'riot' imagining all sorts or spooky scenarios, wondering where she'll pop up next. Scaryeeeee. Cheers Maria
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2024 6:21:00 AM
The witch is probably home watching t.v. and looking forward to voting next month. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/11/2024 7:18:00 AM
There needs to be a follow up to this. Where the heck did the witch go? Your second stanza was a standout for me Hilda. Great write. Cheers - Gary
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/11/2024 7:44:00 AM
No follow up. This is a poem, not a story. I allow the reader the chance to ruminate on an ending. Thank you for enjoying my poem.
Date: 10/10/2024 2:17:00 PM
Great rhymes this had me engaged until the end!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/10/2024 3:48:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.
Date: 10/10/2024 8:53:00 AM
A FAV for sure! Love it! She no longer webs the grounds, rides a broom with eerie, swishing sounds; yet, some chilly nights, throughout the towns...her name not spoken, fearing injurious, cold presence, yet abounds.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/10/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you very much. I appreciate the fav. It is obvious that I'm looking forward to Halloween. Enjoy the scary holiday.
Date: 10/9/2024 7:39:00 AM
Very haunting.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/9/2024 12:15:00 PM
Yes, it was haunting. I'm still brushing the dirt off my clothes. (Cackle). I'm glad it was interesting.
Date: 10/8/2024 6:01:00 AM
The ground and whole enchilada is cursed. A doozy
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/8/2024 6:35:00 AM
Thank you. Happy Halloween.
Date: 10/7/2024 2:19:00 PM
eeek this is very spooky Hilda, ideal for this time of year! hugs jan xx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/7/2024 3:22:00 PM
Just 24 days until Halloween. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/7/2024 7:01:00 AM
Haha Hilda l love this....scary spooky write! Debx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/7/2024 7:28:00 AM
Thank you . Glad you like it.
Date: 10/6/2024 10:26:00 PM
LOL!! Very scary and fun, in the spirit of Halloween! Thanks for sharing this enjoyable poem, sure to cause laughter. :D
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/7/2024 12:56:00 AM
I'm glad you like it. I look forward to Halloween every year. Enjoy the holiday.
Date: 10/6/2024 8:26:00 PM
Wow, great spooky Halloween poem! Nailing down the coffin won't do any good!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/6/2024 9:02:00 PM
Yep. Halloween will be here before long. Thanks for reading.

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