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The Cake You Showed Me

Happy Birthday April where ever you are somewhere up in heaven flying amongst the stars Today I'll buy that cake that you said was your favorite and somehow celebrate what we meant to God I wish you could see the smile on my face somewhere in heaven I'm sure it's someplace And what ever gifts they give in Heaven in our case lets hope that I have one But always know that in my heart I would have given you the world God showed me the one and you, you were that girl but the price I needed to pay for you was totally out of this world So today I give you freedom from my hating that you left take every bit of heaven I have no more regrets

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James Foulk

Date: 4/11/2011 6:44:00 PM

a very beautiful and refreshing piece of poetry. thank you for reading A Rose Fell and for your comment.

Anthony Barrow

Date: 4/10/2011 8:44:00 PM

great slice of art....a neat sweet treat to read

Dana Smith

Date: 4/9/2011 11:55:00 AM

Wonderful read this afternoon. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

Elaine George

Date: 4/6/2011 12:58:00 AM

Heat-wrenching, John. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2011 9:03:00 PM

Sad one, john. take every bit of heaven. Such touching words!

James Peranteau

Date: 4/4/2011 11:35:00 AM

Heart renching dear poet ! The tears are not rolling out here my friend...like torrents, they bleed ! Wonderful write ! Have a blessed week ! much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2011 10:59:00 AM

John, I'm sure April is basking peacefully in heaven's light, feeling no regrets and just waiting for the day when you meet again. Beautiful poem for my favorites! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2011 12:39:00 PM

John, This site sent me to login when I validated my comment..That is the reason for no name..Sara

Lisa Cooper

Date: 4/2/2011 11:38:00 AM

great pen. Heaven isn't that far, you only to wish upon a star.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/2/2011 8:57:00 AM

It will be a glorious day when you meet in heaven again. soup mail

Louis Rams

Date: 4/2/2011 8:50:00 AM

i am surrounded by people and their faces i do not see, but i know from heaven , you are looking down upon me. whether it's down here on earth or up in the heavens above,, god gave me a girl that i will forever love.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/1/2011 8:11:00 PM

Hey John....it has been 4 years since Wallace died and 2 since Jerry died this march. a sadness that will never go away. i do think of them in heaven well and happy. Our journey we must finish and work out all our tasks.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 6:33:00 AM

John this is a magnificent write my friend.. touching and tender ..loving and stunning ... expression and emotional piece.. conveying special thoughts of your intense luv .. the opening verse of lines is simply beautiful to compliment the other verses.. enjoyed and happy weekend luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 6:15:00 AM

priceless adoration of april's wonders ... wow, john! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 4:53:00 AM

Lovely invocation to April, john.