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What things does one possess at journey's end? What bits and bobs? What trivial tripe? Please, do tell, what is the hype? For should I recall anything at all of trinkets obtained in memory's shawl, it would be the warmth of a companion's smile; his hand in mine, while on this earth for a while. The tickle of a tide brushing against tiny toes, while the whisper in the wind, tells me all she knows. Should I gaze at gems, pearls, rubies, emeralds-- Forsake the wisdom of the solid for the beauty of the temporal? Should I throw caution to the wind, like seeds for the birds, or stick to what I know - the solemnity of the written word. Of trinkets obtained in memory's shawl, be there anything at all worthy of my recall? Happiness, Peace, Love and Joy - these remained to be my one and only lot. These intangible things more valuable by far than gold and silver ingots. At journey's end I stopped to ponder, in the cloudless starlit night, about the heavens and her wonder; I was struck by sudden insight: the lightness of the moon suspended in air, and the weight of a mere thought that put it there.

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Date: 3/21/2016 8:53:00 AM
Hi Tim, I did so enjoy this write. Your poetry is always consistent , it can be thought provoking and it is always of a high standard. I did read your poem and i did look at my own life Tim and i did feel content. I do have every thing i need. Thank you for that my friend. Your words just flow in such a wonderful way. This is a definite 7+ Tim and it goes into my faves. Excellent my friend....Vlad.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2016 1:03:00 AM
Your comments and feedback are the best, my friend. I really appreciate your support and encouraging words! :)
Date: 2/12/2016 10:37:00 PM
Truly fantastic write Timothy. That message may be far more tangible than our earthly limited minds can understand. A7
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Date: 2/8/2016 6:26:00 PM
A wonderful list of intangibles that are really what it is all about. The amazing thing about this piece is how unobtrusive the rhyme is. I had to read back a second time to even see the rhymes. The content raised it above the form and the beautiful closing lines are pure magic. A fav for me. SuZ
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Date: 2/5/2016 9:04:00 AM
wow, this is AMAZING, Timothy!!! I am going to fave this one. I have stumbled onto one of your very best.
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Date: 2/5/2016 9:03:00 AM
Hmmm, I was wrong what I said about seeing all your poems. Now I realize there may be others I never saw because this one does not have a comment from me. Let me read this one now!!
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:15:00 PM
*claps* Beautiful and full of truth. Well said. There's so much more to life than material pleasures. In the end it will gain you nothing. Doesn't the joy of life consist of friendship, love, and family? Not by how much you can gain...but rather how much you can give after all.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 1/20/2015 3:21:00 AM
You are deserving of "well said" as well, Caleah! Better to give than to received, what a statement.
Date: 1/5/2015 10:03:00 AM
I wish many more young people like you looked at life with such a knowing outlook. Material gain might have its importance, but at journey's end it will count next to nothing. Give me good health, love , peace, happiness and enough to get by...and like Eileen, I am content! #7 // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 1/20/2015 3:19:00 AM
Appreciate the comments Paul! Be content always... :)
Date: 1/5/2015 7:20:00 AM
Oh, Timothy...You had me from the first line till the end. You really enchanted my thoughts with this simple truth so beautifully spun. We don't take anything with us....The intangibles...Give me love an passion...give me a ride at night to see the lights and I am content. How beautiful to know...you think along the same lines. Hugs
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 1/20/2015 3:18:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, as always... hope you are enjoying the new year?
Date: 1/4/2015 10:32:00 PM
What a privilege it is to be the first to comment on this beautiful piece. You have figured out the secret to life. How wonderfully you express the importance of existence on earth. Happy new year my friend.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 1/20/2015 3:17:00 AM
Thanks Connie... glad you liked it! Blessings...

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