Sweet Jesus

On the day our eyes open to the prism of the sun On that day, Winter solitude would be gone The avalanche of differences melts into nothingness Through the same breath,through the same soul We would live again as one ,no matter who we are No matter the colour of our skin,Gay or straight rich or poor,innocent or once found guilty. No matter if We are lawyers,prisoners,doctors,drug victims or pheasants No matter our political believes ,nor our different religions A catholic,a muslim,a buddhist , a hinduist,or a jew . On that day,we would all wear identical dresses We would all be the significant other ,because He has died, and He has died for all. Jesus died for Peter,John and Judah for Lazarus and Maria Magdalene, Jesus died for me , He has died for you ,for him ,for her,and even for them. He gave up till the last drop of blood and painful cry for each and every name engraved upon our Father's palm. He was born to die,but its not his death that we celebrate , We celebrate His life ,because we believe in life We celebrate His forgivness ,because We experienced the beauty of forgivness ,the happiness ,the return of blissful joy. and , We celebrate the ever present love Because it is the gift of love that He bestowed on us Jesus was born to die , but He was born to rise Upon death He has risen , through His death We survived Because of Him , in the darkness ,in the labyrinth of our night There will always,always be the little flicker of a candle that fills our hearts with hope ,and warming light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/14/2015 1:55:00 AM
Beautiful message. What I like about your techniqe is the message is the same, regardless of if one starts reading from the top or the bottom. Excellent job!
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:16:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, This is a very Powerful poem. Thank you for this sweet, simple, truthful message. God Bless you. Amen.
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:23:00 PM
Hooray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 4/23/2015 10:06:00 AM
We worship a living God...thank you for this, Charma.
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:17:00 PM
Beautiful words and the best part is the beautiful message. I love my savior! Thank you for this poem. It's wonderful! <3 Tash
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Date: 4/8/2015 5:45:00 PM
Amen.... great write Charma about my favourite brother! Always, Keith:-)
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Date: 4/6/2015 12:42:00 AM
I have love you with an everlasting love...You are engraved on the palms of my hands. Charmaine, bless you for lifting high His name....He is smiling down at you, my sweet. Yes...we are ALL his children, but how sweet is the realization that...as Peter says..."There is no other name under heaven given to man by which he can be saved." The name of Jesus....Immanuel...God with us....is that name! Sweetie...forgiveness should be extended, even when not asked for...but trust need not be. :) Thanks!!
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Date: 4/5/2015 1:30:00 PM
This is a loving Christian affirmation with your personal poetic touch where hope is reborn each day through His love. Emile.
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Date: 4/5/2015 1:27:00 PM
Jesus, I love you so much. Your advices touched my soul..You are great..You are the true son of the Almighty....We are spoiled children of him....Please help us...Please love us...Please forgive us....Please give us better tomorrow...favorite...
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:58:00 PM
It all begins with love, nicely written, I like it muchly :)
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Date: 4/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
This is very inspired and inspiring, Charm. The feeling of faith and trust flows through every line. #7 May I wish you and your family a Blessed and Happy Easter. // paul
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Date: 4/4/2015 3:43:00 AM
outstanding piece of writing adoring beautiful piece charmaine and may his light of beauty forever flow from your pen wishing you and your family a happy easter dear friend
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:03:00 PM
oh my gosh how I wish I had thought of this. Wonderful creativity, Charma. Simply wonderful. And a happy easter to you too.
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Date: 4/3/2015 8:09:00 PM
Wonderful, and heartwarming! Hugs
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Date: 4/3/2015 6:19:00 PM
Amazing, a wonderful write. A Fav!
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:51:00 PM
Beautiful, a 7 for this wonderful verse for Easter, His resurrection. Have a wonderful Easter
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:00:00 PM
Yes Charma we celebrate that He is risen...I love the line" Jesus died for each and every name engraved upon our father's palm"...so beautiful...happy Easter...hugs Tim...a fav
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