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tight path reach an end half the bay gets lost in haze will sun ever shine? dandelion wrecked drifts at the kitchen window pleasant southern wind withered apple core sits in a vacant park place shifting brown to black
Written: May 15, 2023

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Date: 2/19/2024 12:09:00 PM
At least the apple cores will help fertilize that park. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/31/2023 11:41:00 AM
A grand string of Haikus. I especially like how you move from the larger scene of haze over the bay to a decaying apple core receding to black. Excellent images to convey natural occurrences (like spring dandelions) to shifting colors. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 5/16/2023 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful haiku! Love the references to the sun and the dandelion.
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:25:00 AM
colorful and delightful, enjoyed very much, yann
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Date: 5/16/2023 6:05:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, Your well-written string of haikus has good content and imagery. Well done. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2023 5:47:00 AM
Great imagery, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/16/2023 2:02:00 AM
Perfect haikus. Not my forte.
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Date: 5/15/2023 8:34:00 PM
I feel the pleasant southern wind and the hazy atmosphere ! Beautiful haiku series....
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