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Swans

Serene lake frames cobalt, Stirred by rolling ripples. Shadows of autumn cloud Sense the swings of white wings. Soaring ivory fleet Slowly descends to turn Suddenly to spry swans.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/9/2024 4:47:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara K
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/9/2024 5:53:00 AM
Many thanks, Sara.
Date: 11/3/2024 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Swans" write. I love your pretty picture painted by your words. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 11/2/2024 4:48:00 PM
Thanks for keeping it plural swans. Other beautiful swan entries changed to singular swan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/2/2024 7:40:00 PM
I make many age-related mistakes, I am glad I made this one right. Thanks for the placement.
Date: 11/2/2024 4:46:00 PM
That middle line is a wowser, Subimal. Congrats in my contest
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/2/2024 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea for the placement.

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