Swans

Stately in form and poise, Swimming, so beautiful, So magnificently She moves, without effort, Soft feathers gleaming white, Serene in the sunset. Stunning all who see her.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 5:19:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem about a female swan. Thanks for entering. Congrats, John

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2024 2:56:00 PM

what a delightful poem John, there used to be lots of contests using this form but they havent been around for quite some time now. hugs Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2024 4:54:00 PM

I write lots of silly childish toilet humour type poems lol I self published a book of 366 poems last year and am working on my second ( and last) toilet humour and risque rhymes:-) hugs Jan xx

John Wilmore
Date: 10/13/2024 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Jan for your kind words. ! I typically write silly, childish poems but like to occasionally challenge myself to write something with a bit more substance.