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'surreal Expectation'

looking at the crystal ball maintaining an open mind so loud the vernacular of love and ardor a promise without a word expectation surreal passion our barometer written in the stars the two of us together our hands entwined, binding hearts identifiable beats in the crystal ball Written by: Wilma Neels Contest Name: Crystal ball 110920111825

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2011 1:01:00 AM
Hey, congrats and gosh, it looks like this is one I never even saw yet! I love the last verse of this.
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Date: 9/20/2011 4:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:12:00 AM
a pretty love song and prophecy, wilms..heartfelt congrats on your award winning treasure… huggs!
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:33:00 PM
Wilma congrats on your win, it was written in the stars..David
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:35:00 PM
Wilma, Beautiful job. Great to see a second place win for you. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2011 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda,Wilma
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:47:00 AM
A well deserved win with this one Wilma. Congratulations
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:16:00 PM
CONGRATS WILMA ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS EMOTIONAL ENTRY LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 5:49:00 PM
Unique piece here Wilma, best of wishes for the contest..
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:02:00 AM
Your "barometer" is truly heated with passion in this write, Wilma. Thoughts of young love and hope are so well expressed. As we get older, our minds are more closed. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:43:00 PM
Love the images in this special verse. Nicely done and good luck.
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful image - the magic of the crystal ball, magic of the mind in collaboration. Love, daver
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