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Superficial Love

She pooh-poohed his smallish gift. He looked glum and she looked miffed. No diamond in sight, She did not delight. Her love for him was set adrift.

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Date: 2/11/2024 9:28:00 AM
Superficial indeed. I like this one a lot.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/11/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Thanks! :)
Date: 2/6/2024 10:13:00 PM
Go big or go home alone! Nice limerick, Linda. Write On! Bill p.s. I told Sara about the problem you're having posting your comments on her poems.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/8/2024 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Bill. Yes, I read so many of Sara's poems, it is sad that I cannot comment, and ludicrous to use email for such. I will keep trying however, just as I do with Anaya. Every once in a while, one will slip through whatever barrier there is. :))
Date: 2/5/2024 8:53:00 PM
Hope he learned his lesson. Wonderful limerick, Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/6/2024 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Jerry.
Date: 2/4/2024 9:19:00 PM
Hahahaha. Some 'gift.'
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/5/2024 5:13:00 PM
Exactly... smiles and smiles laf :)
Date: 2/4/2024 11:20:00 AM
Cute and witty L.O ! Debx
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 11:32:00 AM
Hi sweet Deb! Thanks for stopping by this afternoon! LO :)

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