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Summer Vacations

Memories of my childhood often resurface, from the deep trenches of my mind and, a soul lost in the waves of day-to-day hassles, finds itself risen up to the realm of rejoice. Those summer vacations in my native place, memorable moments of month-long holidays, carefree days with nothing but play with cousin sisters and cousin brothers. The long walks through the rice fields and the vast unfenced lush green pastures, that led to my paternal uncle's house, that sits in the midst of greenery, holding hands following one after the other, with gleeful giggles and cheerful chuckles. A small stream to be crossed in midway, that had a shaky wooden bridge, my brothers and sisters crossed with ease, I got stuck in the middle of that bridge, my tiny legs refused to move further in fear, when my eldest brother lent his hand, to help me cross that narrow bridge. These are just a few moments, of those recollections sweet I savour. They help refresh my mind and raise my spirit, and in its warmth, I re-live my childhood. Original Date: 12/09/2020 Originally Submitted for: Story From Your Childhood Poetry Contest Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins Now Submitted for: Podium Placing Promise (7) Poetry Contest Date: 01/12/2021 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/19/2021 7:48:00 PM
As sweet as honey are your childhood memories, Ani. Many congratulations are in order for this nostalgic write. Joy and Jubilation, Gershon
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Date: 1/13/2021 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations Ani. Beautiful write. Happy Pongal. Enjoy your day. Take care Rama
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/14/2021 9:56:00 AM
Rama thank you so much for your lovely comment. Wishing you a Happy Pongal too dear. Enjoy your day. Hugs :)
Date: 1/13/2021 8:37:00 PM
BIG CONTRATS to win First Place and Best wishes for next Contest. Blessings
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Date: 1/14/2021 9:53:00 AM
Maam thank you so much for your congrats and blessings.. Hugs :)
Date: 1/13/2021 11:01:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your first place win. You have created a wonderful story picture with your imagery. I love the metaphoric reference when you tell of your brother lending you his hand to cross a narrow bridge. Well done!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/14/2021 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam for the visit and the congrats. God bless. Have a blessed day :)
Date: 12/26/2020 6:55:00 PM
wow, how nice this is. I don't know if it placed in the contest (mine did not, but this one sure deserved to). I have similar memories from the year my mom divorced and my sisters and I lived on her dad's farm. (corn not rice!!)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/27/2020 8:06:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much... am so blessed to receive such a valuable comment from YOU. But, it's ok. I just enjoy participating in contests. Wow great memories of yours... it must have been amazing.. those corn fields... truly these are the lovely memories that can never be erased. Love and hugs :)
Date: 12/10/2020 4:24:00 PM
Lovely childhood memories Anitha, I can picture the walk to your uncles house, it must have been wonderful for you all back then. Belle
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/10/2020 9:48:00 PM
Thank you dear Belle.. for the visit and comment. Have a lovely day.. Hugs :)
Date: 12/9/2020 11:18:00 PM
Such lovely memories. I envy you. At my age I'm turning senile and am forgetting things. Have a safe day. ~~
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/10/2020 1:59:00 AM
Oh Victor... I may also forget when I get old. It is quite natural. Thank you so much for the visit. You too have a safe blessed day :)
Date: 12/9/2020 12:12:00 PM
- A big brother is the best we can have when you are little and scared ... a wonderful story, Ani :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/10/2020 1:56:00 AM
Anne thank you so much dear. Yes very true... missing them all... Will mail you soon Anne... didn't get time.. Much love n hugs :)

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