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oh to live a life beneath your full potential to know there is so much more you could have done said more that you could have bled to give others life oh, the inner strife mediocrity does not bode well it's a living, burning hell to know there is the sublime yet you're running out of time the years jeer that inner fear that time will not last you'll be part of the past and yet what will live on when you are gone? that inner cosmos of whirling ideas the planetary magnitude of thoughts becoming black holes of disappointment sucking into the void all that you could have become if I could tap inside find the words to make life ex nihilo syndrome overcome there is always something we were born with it the ability to create but for many it lies dormant stagnates and their names are not remembered not I while I breathe I try to bring to life the wonder of wisdom the beneficence of beauty the longevity of love the pleasure of passion the care of compassion the perfection of peace the sweetness of serenity let it be... all these and more are there in my heart, in store this medium is mine poetry...the rhyme set to my heart beat rhythmic reality words to whet the appetite to move to shock to invigorate to satiate to medicate to alleviate to liberate to enlighten to brighten to instill the will to laugh, to love, and to....live while this heart beats while this soul breathes while the mind can yet think the quest goes on to express the wonder that lies within Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/1/2017 8:39:00 AM

I think you underestimate the significance of your words and passion. As always You move me.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/31/2017 2:12:00 PM

WOW! Elieen, Every word and every line just "wowed" me. Not only did this poem WOW me it inspired me to at least try to unlock my hidden potential. If never stops trying they will eventually be successful. I could on and about this amazing write. You use your gift in an amazing way. This would have been an easy seven:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/31/2017 4:15:00 AM

Beautifully crafted my friend...your thoughts are magic...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2017 9:21:00 PM

This is a poet's poem Eileen. It speaks to the heart and soul of poets who want to live on through their words. Beautiful! : )

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2017 2:02:00 PM

Thanks, dear. Poetry is very dear to me. There's so much that I would love to write about, but sometimes I don't have the time or the words to express myself. You are always a source of encouragement. Hugs, dear. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2017 6:55:00 PM

wow you said a mouthful, Eileen. You are wondrous. May your quill write on forevermore!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2017 2:03:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. You are kind! I will write as I am able...that's for sure. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 7/29/2017 7:58:00 AM

There is so much we could achieve in life, Eileen, yet time is not always on our side, and there are moments when we lack the energy to perform. May your beautiful and passionate poetry give you and your readers an added scope for living. Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2017 2:05:00 PM

You are right, dear. Depression also affects my writing at times. However, when I am in the right frame of mind, there is nothing that gives me more joy or pleasure.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2017 12:00:00 PM

- A wonderful poem dear Eileen, with many thoughts and feelings - Hope you have had a lovely holiday :) - Regards and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2017 2:06:00 PM

Thanks, dear Sunshine. You know I write from the bottom of my heart! :) Hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/27/2017 7:53:00 AM

I truly enjoyed reading this awesome poem Eileen! What a fabulous piece my friend! You have written a beautiful monologue that will instill harmony within me for days to come! Your inspiration creates in me a passion to write more and more! What a glorious poem Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2017 2:07:00 PM

A passion to write is what burns within me. I'm glad it has served as a little inspiration to you as well. Hugs. :)

Silent One

Date: 7/27/2017 7:36:00 AM

Inspirational poem Eileen that encourages people to fulfil their potential, sad thing is some are too busy looking at others and judging them, to fulfil their own potential.. Well written poem..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thank you for the visit, SO. The focus should always be inward...on the wonders within and on finding ways of expression. Regards.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/27/2017 7:20:00 AM

We all have God given talents Eileen. I can only hope I can use mine to make this a better world. Love your musings.