Starling

gleaming feathers shine whilst the songbird sweetly sings - a melodic tune --------- Songbird haiku Poetry Contest Starling 8/18/2021

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2021 11:10:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku. Congratulations on your win!

Avery Won
Date: 8/24/2021 4:35:00 AM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2021 3:12:00 PM

yes, their feathers shine, as I recall. So pretty! Congrats

Avery Won
Date: 8/24/2021 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2021 9:58:00 AM

These simple, humble little birds have a beautiful song. Congratulations on your win Avery.

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 10:12:00 AM

Thanks, Sam :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/23/2021 5:40:00 AM

Lovely, Congrats. Love, Gina (GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS)

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/23/2021 5:19:00 AM

Beautiful read out loud! Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you, Kim!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/23/2021 4:29:00 AM

Avery, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku!

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Tania!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2021 12:12:00 PM

beautifully penned Avery:-) hugs Jan xx

Avery Won
Date: 8/18/2021 1:11:00 PM

Thank you :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/18/2021 5:53:00 AM

Very nice. Well done :)

Avery Won
Date: 8/18/2021 6:15:00 AM

Thanks!