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Squirrels

Swinging through the trees, Gathering nuts for winter, Life is not a breeze. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 2011

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/11/2014 9:40:00 PM

A cartoonesque haiku! What a great depiction of the struggle for food!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 10:57:00 PM

Oh, I love your ending line. I think I did one on squirrels this year too. Wonderful.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/11/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/8/2014 4:22:00 PM

Very nicely penned Brenda! Love your haiku and the pretty pic too! ;) Hugs! Love peace and light! xxxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/11/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Dorian

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/8/2014 5:54:00 AM

Pretty lines.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 3:28:00 AM

Perfect haiku Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx The issue I have is the pic needs to be a red squirrel not a grey tree rat lol

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 9:02:00 AM

Oh my Jan, Canadian squirrels com in many colors.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/7/2014 9:37:00 PM

Love the photograph.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/7/2014 9:36:00 PM

WoW one of the best I have ever read. I am such a big fan of your poetry. Another touch of brilliance.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/7/2014 9:55:00 PM

You are so kind Maurice. I am always honoured when someone enjoys reading my poetry. Thank you.