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(Medusa head cactus—Image courtesy of cactusrl.blogspot.com)

“It is spring again. The earth is like a child that knows poems by heart.” Quote by Rainer Maria Rilke
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Medusa cactus in large blue ceramic pot blooms a burst of sunshine over her green appendages. A sparrow narrowly escapes from calico cat’s paws. Hearts flutter as rose petals fall with gentle rain from pink skies. Two circling falcons above call like halcyons’ riding high winds in the sun’s fiery reflections. Shimmering waters below reflect white clouds above. Sunlight trickles between pink cherry blossoms, lapis lazuli glimmers through. Pastel spring colors burst forth in wildflowers across distant hills, colors of rainbows. A duck family swimming together squabble like old men, then, quickly agree. Crows dot branches where they rest in green sprouting trees like giant bumble bees. Mockingbirds fly where colorful kites float on winds. Newly hatched butterflies ascend to meet them. White florets crown an apple tree, pink hues kissing each branch as jeweled hummingbirds attend. Snapshots

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Date: 3/2/2024 7:30:00 AM
Your lovely poem captures the vivid imagery of nature's beauty and the dynamic interactions within the ecosystem. The imagery weaves together scenes of flora and fauna, painting a picture of harmony and motion in the natural world... It serves as a celebration of the interconnectedness of all living things, reminding us of the beauty and wonder that surrounds us in the everyday moments of life.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:26:00 PM
thank you, Silent One, for taking the time to thoroughly read and comment on my poem. Grateful you saw the 'interconnectedness." That' what I was going for. :-)
Date: 3/2/2024 5:31:00 AM
A beautiful snapshot of spring. You have captured the true beauty of the season.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:25:00 PM
thank you, my poet friend, Jerry. I appreciate your visit today. Have a splendid weekend, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 11:01:00 PM
Hi Sara, such a wonderfully rich snapshot of spring , you never cease to amaze with your wondrous imagery , this is truly magical and worthy of any contest , you are certainly a winner in my eyes . Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:39:00 AM
ahhhh, you're so kind, Daniel. I do appreciate your visits and your enthusiastic compliments. Grateful for your presence here in Poetry Soup. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful snapshots. I enjoyed all these images of spring. Cute stanza about the ducks too. Well done :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:19:00 PM
thank you, Heidi. You're so kind. Appreciate you stopping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 11:28:00 AM
You covered the enchanting Spring snapshot. Beautiful poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:20:00 PM
thank you, Jay! Grateful for your kind words and for your encouragement. Have a great weekend, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 8:48:00 AM
Yes Sara! Quite beautiful!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:19:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, James, and for your positive comment! Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 7:53:00 AM
Dear Sara, your poem captures the enchanting essence of spring with its delightful imagery and harmonious verses. The vibrant and uplifting theme effortlessly resonates throughout your Free Verse, creating a truly captivating reading experience that is further enriched by the accompanying picture and quote.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:21:00 PM
thank you, kind Sotto, for dropping by. I'm grateful for your positive comments. Glad you found my poem a captivating read. Have a pleasant weekend, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 7:14:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and flowing poetry describe your snapshots of spring, Sara. A very vibrant and uplifting theme is exhibited in your Free Verse. The picture and quote both enhance the reading experience of this poem. Nice entry for the contest, good luck! Have a pleasant day, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:22:00 PM
Grateful for your supportive and kind words, dear hubby. Glad you found my poem vibrant and uplifting, like spring. hugs Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 6:00:00 AM
Delightful spring images, Sara. Lovely sights and sounds adorn your poem. Splendidly articulated melodies.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:24:00 PM
thanks, Vijay. Grateful you enjoyed the imagery, as well as my poems sights and sounds. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 5:19:00 AM
Dear Sara, What a picture of the beauty and vitality of the season. Each stanza is like a breathtaking snapshot capturing the essence of spring's charm and vibrancy. From the blooming Medusa cactus to the playful duck family, your imagery evokes a sense of wonder and joy. These are delightful scenes that remind us of the magic of spring. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:27:00 PM
You nailed it, Daniel! Thanks for your wonderful comments. Grateful you found my imagery magical, full of wonder and joy...the joy of spring's arrival. Hooray! Have a blessed evening. Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:25:00 PM
You nailed it, Daniel! Thanks for your wonderful comments. Grateful you found my imagery magical, full of wonder and joy...the joy of spring's arrival. Hooray! Have a blessed evening. Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 5:16:00 AM
What a wonderful amalgam of flowers and birds. The ambience of spring is so much felt. Reading your descriptions, my mind springs in joy. Love the image of the duck family squabbling like old men, then quickly agree. I can relate to it. I have heard ducks squabbling... making a harsh sound as if they are fighting. Lovely poem dear one. All the Best...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:26:00 PM
you're such a kind person, Valsa. I'm delighted your mind sprung with joy as your read my poem. What a lovely comments. I agree...ducks are obnoxious when they're squabbling. Appreciate your visit...have a delightful weekend, dearest poet friend.
Date: 3/1/2024 5:12:00 AM
Snapshot of a scene or scenes. Nice one. We have spring plants slowly coming alive which is good and with our berries and fruit trees it could be bad for a harvest. I hope that they don't get killed by frost. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page ..Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:28:00 PM
thanks for appreciating my joyful springtime poem. Everything is slowing coming alive here too...I love watching flowers slowly emerge and the trees budding. I feel alive again! Grateful for your ongoing support, Sara K. Hugs Sara B
Date: 3/1/2024 4:59:00 AM
Spring is well underway here too Sara. It's lovely to see everything growing again. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:18:00 PM
thank you for visiting, Tom. I agree..lovely to see earth's revival...can now walk outside without my winter walking clothes. Hooray! Have a great weekend yourself, Sara

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