Sound Ii

SOUND II clear night moon noisy gold so quiet in mid air pin explodes deep forest some hidden thing moon cries out! cat and bird my heart races the sound of silence early Sunday morn not a leaf stirs dog barking

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/24/2012 9:36:00 AM

Def. got my thoughts crackling here Dave ! Awesome write dear poet ! Have a wonderful day my friend...and I sent you Soup-mail....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:58:00 PM

My favorites are 3 and 4, but all are good, Daver. Love your haiku!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2012 1:15:00 PM

OOo I like the noisy gold image... this is my favorite set of haikus ever... enjoyed..pd

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/22/2012 11:27:00 AM

an array of stunning 'kus so descriptive and filled with toned imagery, daver.... much delighted!..:) hugggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2012 2:45:00 PM

Well, I don't think that it has been that quiet around here..I need to get up in the middle of the night and see if it is so quiet that I can hear the moon...Excellent work ..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were lifting..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 2:31:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Daver. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/21/2012 1:11:00 PM

brilliant! daver! i really like your haiku. it inspires me to write more :) well done. big hugs love ya deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2012 12:04:00 PM

Bravo....well written Daver!!! - oxox Anne-Lise