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Sloppy, Slippery Rock

(Parody of Hickory Dickory Dock) Sloppy, slippery rock The boy ran up the rock. The rock shook once. The boy ran down. Sloppy, slippery rock Sloppy, slippery rock The boy ran up the rock. The rock shook twice. The boy ran down. Sloppy, slippery rock Sloppy, slippery rock The boy ran up the rock. The rock shook thrice. The boy ran down. Sloppy, slippery rock Sloppy, slippery rock The boy ran up the rock. The rock gave way. The boy lost his sway. Sloppy, slippery rock May.15.2023 Mother Goose Grows Up Poetry Contest Sponsor- Miranda Hawley

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Date: 5/16/2023 1:59:00 PM
Excellent ,my friend. Such a fun write Pangie
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Date: 5/16/2023 12:32:00 PM
Cute and clever, Valsa! I enjoyed this
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Date: 5/16/2023 10:00:00 AM
Very clever. This could be a nursery rhyme.
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Date: 5/16/2023 8:06:00 AM
I like this one, Valsa:)
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Date: 5/16/2023 2:01:00 AM
Loved your nursery rhyme. Well done.
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Date: 5/15/2023 6:13:00 PM
What I really like about this is how, just like 'Mother G.,' that last stanzy is nasty! Good one, Valsa.
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Date: 5/15/2023 1:05:00 PM
Excellent submission for the contest Valsa; I hope all is well with you. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day.
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Date: 5/15/2023 8:34:00 AM
Love your poem, Happy Mothers Day to you: ) Hope you had a great relaxing day
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Date: 5/15/2023 7:11:00 AM
Great take on the contest theme Valsa, hope you're keeping well. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/15/2023 5:33:00 AM
You got the rhythm and delivered on your theme splendidly, Valsa. Best to you.
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