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signs of autumn

leaves tumbling from trees
wild geese honking overhead~
bright orange pumpkins

frost-etched window panes
crimson canopies aflame~
scarecrows atrophied

carved jack-o-lanterns
bare naked trees stripped of leaves~
the songbirds are mute

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/22/2024 6:42:00 AM I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 10/22/2024 9:09:00 AM Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2024 10:54:00 PM Back with my congrats. You are amazing. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 10/10/2024 7:36:00 AM Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate it, my friend.

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/8/2024 1:06:00 PM Emile, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 10/9/2024 6:58:00 AM Thanks, Tania; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2024 11:06:00 AM Hi, Emile I especially liked the last lines of two and three. It's so important for a good haiku. Scarecrows atrophied and songbirds that are mute. Love those images. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 10/1/2024 11:50:00 AM Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate your comments, my friend.

Benjamin Bartley Date: 9/22/2024 9:55:00 AM Lovely haikus. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 9/22/2024 1:12:00 PM Thanks, Benjamin; I appreciate your comments, my friend.

Ink Empress Date: 9/22/2024 9:30:00 AM Ah dear Emile this is absolutely gorgeous! So autumnal and gives me the halloween vibes too! Your wordplay here and how youv used lines such as “ crimson canopies aflame~ scarecrows atrophied” truly stood out for me! Impressive! “ carved jack-o-lanterns trick-or-treaters in costume~ the songbirds are mute” hauntingly beautiful! I absolutely loved reading this! Best wishes always! Sending you light Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 9/22/2024 1:14:00 PM Thanks, Ink Empress. I appreciate your comments. Your critiques always bring a smile to my day, my friend. Emile.