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leaves tumbling from trees wild geese honking overhead~ bright orange pumpkins frost-etched window panes crimson canopies aflame~ scarecrows atrophied carved jack-o-lanterns bare naked trees stripped of leaves~ the songbirds are mute

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:42:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2024 9:09:00 AM

Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 10:54:00 PM

Back with my congrats. You are amazing.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/10/2024 7:36:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate it, my friend.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:06:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/9/2024 6:58:00 AM

Thanks, Tania; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2024 11:06:00 AM

Hi, Emile I especially liked the last lines of two and three. It's so important for a good haiku. Scarecrows atrophied and songbirds that are mute. Love those images.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2024 11:50:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate your comments, my friend.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 9/22/2024 9:55:00 AM

Lovely haikus. Thanks for sharing.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/22/2024 1:12:00 PM

Thanks, Benjamin; I appreciate your comments, my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/22/2024 9:30:00 AM

Ah dear Emile this is absolutely gorgeous! So autumnal and gives me the halloween vibes too! Your wordplay here and how youv used lines such as “ crimson canopies aflame~ scarecrows atrophied” truly stood out for me! Impressive! “ carved jack-o-lanterns trick-or-treaters in costume~ the songbirds are mute” hauntingly beautiful! I absolutely loved reading this! Best wishes always! Sending you light

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/22/2024 1:14:00 PM

Thanks, Ink Empress. I appreciate your comments. Your critiques always bring a smile to my day, my friend. Emile.