Shark Tale

shark tale I once enjoyed a movie on a shark. His bite much bigger than a dogs bark. In the ocean JAWS scared more than fish. A bite so deep no one could stitch. With teeth so sharp, always leaving a mark.. S.K.A.T. POETRY FIRST LIMERICK EVER ...

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Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2016 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured with this Limerick....it sure has bite YNR : )

David Waldrop

Date: 8/18/2016 10:58:00 AM

My most intimidating Nemesis. Exciting thrilling movie that kept me away from large bodies of water until I was the age of 16. Such a short poem to give me chills nice write SKAT

Carole Duet

Date: 8/15/2016 11:11:00 PM

Neat little limerick! Like it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2015 11:47:00 PM

Skat, back here at your FIRST limerick ever and to ask you a question. When you say the wind poem can't have won a contest in the past , do you mean anybody's contest? Or specifically yours? I think I have one that maybe only got an HM but I want to make sure of your rule if I should enter it or not. I am sure it was not in your contest. Hope you will let me know. thanks, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2015 6:52:00 PM

gosh, you may not have even been born yet in the late 70's. hahaha Time went REALLY fast for me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2015 6:51:00 PM

reading this one again and enjoying it! Sure miss those days when movies like Jaws ruled the movie houses!! Was that before your day, Skat? It was 70's I think. well, you did not answer my question, but don't worry . I wrote of both the sun and the sunset, just to be on the safe side. haha! .

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/4/2015 1:54:00 PM

Interesting poem

Amor Otong

Date: 2/8/2015 8:16:00 PM

Hello SKAT, your poem was simply cute. Good work. Huggs*

Robin Davis

Date: 1/28/2014 10:56:00 PM

SKAT what a cute and silly poem. It leaves an "impression" of humor for the reader. Makes me smile. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Singing Soprano poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 12:21:00 AM

no!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/15/2010 10:30:00 AM

Limericks my fav. you have it girl this is good.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/2/2010 9:21:00 PM

just looking back on this limerick, S.K.A.T, enjoyed, Harry

Sheol Moribund

Date: 8/21/2010 10:19:00 AM

Hey S.K.A.T.: How's it going? Great poem!!! It reminds me (in a way) of 2 of my poems. Peace: Sheol PS: thank you 4 reading andcommenting on my poem.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/5/2010 7:36:00 AM

You did well with this first Limerick! Enjoyed reading it today, Irma!..Gert

Audrey Castaneda

Date: 4/9/2010 10:30:00 PM

ha ha good 2 b ur first... by of course me u know who, belinda

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2010 9:10:00 AM

I think you did very well, for a first try, I find this form very difficult, so bravo.. and thanks for your comment on my unfinished poem (ha ha ).. it is done now.. if you care to have a peak... Constance

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 7:01:00 PM

I would like to say thanks to all, on my comments for shark tale...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2010 10:32:00 PM

well, that last line is a whale of an understatement. hahaha. Irma, you did quite well for your first limerick ever. I enjoyed it. I saw you left me a soupmail. I am in a rush but promise to answer it ether tonight or tomorrow. LUv ya, Andrea

Adell Foster

Date: 3/3/2010 1:37:00 PM

Not bad for your first try, the syllable count is a bit off but other than that you have done a fine job with the rhyme. Thank you for sharing the shark tale. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2010 12:27:00 PM

Been reading so many Limerick poems today just had to come back and read yours again too... this new contest has sparked all the poets to write Limericks today.. hope u have entered this one ... luv.. your BBF Linda-Marie..

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/25/2010 8:26:00 PM

And you did okay, my dear. Just tighten up a bit on the syllable count and you 'll be fine. Everyone starts somewhere and you took the first big step! Congratulatios! Stay with it! There are three P's in Perfection: Practice, Patience and Perserverance. Keep those in mind and you're on your way! Good luck. Thanks for your kind remark. Regards, Gerard

Royal Trevino

Date: 2/25/2010 5:22:00 PM

Good job... creative... i liked this limerick... it was awesome:)

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/25/2010 8:33:00 AM

And you did a wonderful job my friend....:JP]

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/25/2010 8:25:00 AM

Looks great to me!! Good luck in Carolyn's contest!! :) Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 6:02:00 AM

Thankxxx Irma for your kind comments on my poetry .. just luv this one ... should be a sure winner for u.. I did change my entry ..had more time to think about it ..so glad u liked it.. appreciate your encouraging words.. thankxx my dear friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie