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Shadow of Dreams

Shadow of Dreams Look at this HOUSE – shadow of dreams Of hands once strong with hope – This empty shell echos Dreams once dreamed Where promise once sat On a PORCH decorated With swings sheltered by FERNS Hung from a ROOF and eaves Of gingerbread trim Surrounded by a GARDEN With a gate – a DOOR with a glass ROSETTE– A WINDOW into a life Discarded like a broken jar Preserving faith like rows of jams and jellies – A windowpane framed by shredded lace Of shattered wishes Littering a desolate STAIRCASE Leading up to barren emptiness - Where cobwebs ensnare careless visitors In the turret named despair – my newest friend – Trapped as a prisoner of shame – Lonely sorrow and regrets – Living in desolation - Bones bare to unforgiving waves of heat Ragging wilderness hurricanes - All I see is life flowing out of me In my poor dwelling place Yet, A new breath of WHISPERS Calls creaking footsteps - Seek out a musty cellar corner Set on a foundation unfailing Where the heart beats - a steady rhythm – A single lantern light still lives – Holding the key To restoration Of this old home. 7-15-20 Decaying Old House Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance LaFrance

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Date: 7/27/2020 11:34:00 AM
Sam this one is another showcase of your talent. Your muse paints such a poignant picture of deep emotions. I loved it the most because it shines with a gleam of hope in the end. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations Sam: Beautiful descriptive write, I could picture this gracious old home vividly and like that there is hope of restoration. Best, SuZ
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:42:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 7/22/2020 2:27:00 PM
"...HOUSE – shadow of dreams", great start, Sam, "...turret named despair...", "...foundation unfailing", well strung piece of a decaying house my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/22/2020 3:45:00 PM
Hi William! Thank you for your lovely words and your visit. I love seeing old, decaying houses brought back to their original beauty and potential - just like people! Hope you are well in paradise, my friend!
Date: 7/19/2020 4:10:00 PM
i love the uplifting ending and the thought of bringing the house back to life:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2020 3:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend! Somehow I just couldn't let this house with porches, stained glass windows, turrets, gardens and a magnificent staircase without hope. I love seeing these treasures restored! I love seeing people restored! Blessings!
Date: 7/19/2020 3:59:00 PM
Love how this just flows with your thoughts, Sam. You are so talented. Congrats in the contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/22/2020 3:38:00 PM
Welcome back! Felt so strange to be out of touch with everyone! Thank you dear friend. Once I'd had a chance to think about the theme, this one seemed to have a life of its own. hugs and blessings!
Date: 7/15/2020 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Sam, you've used all the words needed for the contest great for a win. But you need to place the sponsors' and contest name , also date you wrote it. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2020 11:38:00 PM
So appreciate your lovely words of compliment and your reminder! Thank you! One thing I've noticed about soupers - they support one another. That is a beautiful trait. Hope you are doing well. Many blessings to you Eve!
Date: 7/15/2020 6:15:00 PM
"A single lantern light still lives – Holding the key To restoration Of this old home." very nostalgic!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2020 11:33:00 PM
All I could see when writing this was a little Victorian house in need of repair but living with hope of a future of restoration! Thank you JCB!
Date: 7/15/2020 3:08:00 PM
i love the feeling of hope at the end of the poem, sam! very descriptive and beautifully written...
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/15/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Ilene. Somehow I just couldn't leave the house without the hope of restoration - hidden light of life. I am so appreciative of your visit and your message. All the best to you.

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