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Senryu First customer of day Sheep farmer needs life insurance. Fleecing begins early. November 11, 2015

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/22/2018 6:33:00 AM

Heh heh heh, SO clever :)

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/22/2018 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Maureen. Oliver

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/9/2018 4:53:00 PM

Can I get my change first? LOL

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/9/2018 5:57:00 PM

Not if your the farmer. LOL Oliver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2017 4:20:00 PM

I wonder who is being fleeced the sheep, the farmer, or the insurance agent???Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/9/2018 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Sara. The poor sheep probably lol Oliver

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/26/2017 10:43:00 AM

(Shear) Poetry. Welcome to the soup and Happy New Year.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/9/2018 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Robert and Happy New Year to you as well. Shear I like that. Oliver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2016 1:05:00 PM

Coming back to this one Oliver, enjoying your haiku this afternoon. LINDA

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/25/2016 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Linda. I have been in a long dry spell and working alot of hours. I hope to start submitting new poems soon. Oliver

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/11/2016 5:15:00 AM

Hello Cona. Thanks. I like this site. Glad you liked the Senryu. No matter what I write or read I like irony. Oliver

Cona Adams

Date: 1/11/2016 5:03:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup, Oliver. Enjoyed your senryu. All senryu poems should include irony, which this one does so well. Great write!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/11/2016 4:39:00 PM

Hello Cona. Glad you liked this Senryu. No matter what I read or write I enjoy irony. Thanks Oliver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/8/2015 1:12:00 PM

Hi Oliver, thank you for the reply. Glad you like the site. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/8/2015 12:59:00 PM

Oliver, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 11/8/2015 1:07:00 PM

Hello Linda. In my short time as a member I have discovered I really like this site. It will be nice to have a group of knowledgeable poets to help me along with good feedback. Thanks Oliver

Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2015 6:28:00 PM

lol very clever:-) Hugs jan xx

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 11/7/2015 6:37:00 PM

Glad you liked it. Thanks