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Sand Castles

built on sand toppled by waves of sorrow…. free love ~//~ © 03 Dec 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/9/2010 7:37:00 AM
Very thought provoking...Bravo! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/7/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:59:00 PM
awesome message that I wish all would take to heart. Congratulations, Charles.
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your win.-kashinath
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:37:00 PM
Congrats Charles on another big win in Irma's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:27:00 AM
Congratulation on 8th place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Charles
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:37:00 PM
Charles~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2010 5:16:00 PM
WoW........Great Haiku.Good luck on contest
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Date: 12/4/2010 8:37:00 AM
Good one..Good luck in the contest with your winner's circle work.Sara
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Date: 12/4/2010 6:49:00 AM
Your poem takes us back to the late '60s and early '70s, Charles. The "free love" movement was spawned by sadness over loss of lives in Vietnam. This is an incredible entry for the contest. I remember those days well. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2010 3:36:00 AM
Nice images to compare castle with life, Charles
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