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Sand and Rock Overture

Blazing orange sun Sings sky and ocean duet. Foaming finale. Inspired by Raul's Seascapes

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/15/2010 7:01:00 AM

Great--painted by a poet with a master pallette.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/14/2010 6:45:00 PM

Awesome, Marty! I can hear the concert in this well written Haiku. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on seascape. The sea must be in a few poets' mind these days. I wrote this before I even knew about the contest. As you said, sitting on the beach is a relaxing thing to do. Best wishes, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2010 2:34:00 PM

I love this Duet.....It captures my soul,,bravo Marty..Charma

Date: 2/14/2010 12:40:00 PM

I like the active nature of this poem. Interesting use of personification in the second line. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 11:52:00 AM

I like it, peachy!!

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/14/2010 8:07:00 AM

You did a great job on this Seascape Haiku. Good luck in Raul's contest.

Skat A

Date: 2/14/2010 7:33:00 AM

NICE VIEW .GREAT HAIKU...ENJOY YOUR VALENTINE DAY .....BESIDES YOUR POEM I ALSO ENJOYED YOUR NICE COMMENTS...I DO LIVE NEAR AN OCEAN .NEXT TIME I AM THIER, I WILL REMEMBER YOUR HAIKU.....IRMA

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 7:32:00 AM

Another good one... another great Haiku of visual vividness .. more good luck for this contest... luv your title... thankxxx for all your loving and wonderful comments on my poetry reads... so appreciative of our friendship and poetry ..luv.. "Sweetheart"