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Robin, Rook, Swan and Dove

A robin its breast as red as cherries The rook in mourning dress, Its nest in the graveyard tree, Cawing in sympathy to tears of distress, Looking down sadly on misery, Hoping its young do not see. The long necked swan swims, So elegant on water, Its beauty supreme; On land it looks ungainly: A beauty queen in jack boots. No sacrifice, the dove coos love Snowy body soaring heavenwards. Jack Horne 27th April 2011 for Constance's Four Beautiful Birds contest

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Date: 6/3/2011 4:01:00 PM
Very creative..A poem of a different feather.Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:23:00 PM
Good result with the win in Constance's contest Jack!
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your big win..I especially like the piece on the swan..made me smile. BG
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:22:00 PM
I love how you began and ended with brilliant description of color: breast as red as cherries/ snowy body... this is very good, Jack. I am loving the poetry that resulted from Constance's awesome contest. congratulations.
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Jack
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's "For (Four) Beautful Birds"contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:44:00 PM
lThis one could very well have been no. 1. Well done Jack. Reads so smoothly you almost don't notice the change of styles. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:23:00 PM
jack… raving KUDOS to you for the special win :) huggs,
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations Jack, on 5th place in my contest with this lovely poem~~
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:35:00 PM
congrats Jack on your amazing win in four birds contest with this beautiful write my friend.. enjoy another top spot with luv... u have Soup Mail..too..
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Date: 4/30/2011 9:05:00 AM
a much beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for your comment on Stranger in the Woods.
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Date: 4/29/2011 7:12:00 PM
Wonderful write,nice smooth flow.Best wishes,Jack---kash
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Date: 4/29/2011 4:10:00 PM
Been workin on this contest for over a week. YIkes. This is smooth and flows so nicely..like your choice of birds..all of the birds you selected are also found in my midwest region. I have had fun researching blue herons and the super high nests and mating rituals for my write. Bet u enjoyed your research too. Blessings. gwendolen
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Date: 4/29/2011 3:46:00 PM
some really pretty images in this one, Jack. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/29/2011 3:05:00 PM
Very good closing lines..Enjoyed reading your competitive work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:28:00 AM
Oh, this is incredible, Jack! Unique observations of the swan that looks "ungainly" on land, the rook that hides its tears in the cemetery from her young and the dove that is an eternal symbol of love. Superb entry for Constance's contest, my friend. Sending winning wishes to you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2011 2:42:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Well done!
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