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Revealing Shades of Red

red, beautiful motion; silent poetry wakes her hidden desires Date of Publishing: 02/03/2015

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2017 1:32:00 PM

Outstanding Teddy! Congratulations on your placement! : )

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/31/2017 8:57:00 AM

Hi Connie. Thank you so much for your warm applause! *^_^*

Lu Loo

Date: 7/28/2017 7:03:00 AM

Wow teddy, so much said in this haiku. Thank you

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/31/2017 8:56:00 AM

Welcome, Laura! :) Thank you for your kind comment! *^_^*

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:40:00 PM

OOHH I love it!!! :) grats on your win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/12/2015 2:58:00 AM

Thanks Casarah! ^_^

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 9:57:00 PM

A passionate write of poetic motion...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/10/2015 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Rhonda! ^_^

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:19:00 PM

TEDDY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 3:11:00 AM

THANK YOU so much Skat! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:57:00 AM

Teddy, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 3:06:00 AM

Thank you for your applause Linda! ^_^ One Love, Teddy.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:53:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Teddy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 3:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for passing by to applaud me Jan! ^_^

Maverick Nyambu

Date: 3/7/2015 11:03:00 AM

Splendid Teddy!!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 12:48:00 AM

Thank you Maverick! ;-)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 6:00:00 AM

Great haiku Teddy...Congrats..love

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/7/2015 7:54:00 AM

Thank you very much Rajat! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:50:00 PM

I REALLY like this one. But your syllables were irregular, as if you were doing a traditional haiku with the count being off on lines one and two. No matter, it was a beauty to me. Congrats for your win in my contest.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/7/2015 5:54:00 AM

Thank you very much for your applause Andrea! ^_^ I will work on my syllable counts in my future haikus.

Joseph May

Date: 3/2/2015 10:22:00 AM

beautiful write....

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/2/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thanks Joseph! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2015 10:15:00 AM

lovely haiku good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/2/2015 11:05:00 PM

Thanks for your well wishes Jan! ^_^