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Red Blossoms

Down where the Camelia blossoms blood red In the heart of winter, when others rest Poverty is stamped out and all are fed And red-breasted Robin has flown the nest Few left to struggle with a cold winter And family farms have disappeared from view None left to tend the fires' dying embers No inheritance left for children to accrue Will the Robins reappear bringing spring A rebirth of values and self-esteem Planted fields whose great harvest brings A wealth of values, wisdom that beams Poverty still planted where blossoms red Values disappeared, disrespect bred Sonnet: With 10 syllable count and rhyme scheme: abab, cdcd, efef, gg Called an English sonnet....

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Date: 1/12/2014 6:08:00 AM
so glad you finished this Sara I have enjoyed my visit to your work today Kudos Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/11/2014 4:41:00 PM
Sara ; This is a beautiful poem and very well written t6oo. I love to see the red Robins in the Spring. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:52:00 PM
Enjoyed how much this poem says Sara, very well crafted; yet contains an urgent element this really appeals...'
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Date: 1/10/2014 5:44:00 AM
Nice poem Sara. I am a fan of nature. This poem can be open to various interpretations. I love the double metaphoric expressions. A nice truthful poem.
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:36:00 PM
The robins will always reappear Sara, A very good poem my friend....Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:12:00 PM
beautifully crafted piece
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Date: 1/8/2014 1:50:00 PM
I love this poem. Even though it is quite sad, I do love it. Thanks for posting.
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Date: 1/8/2014 9:42:00 AM
As I read this poem something comes out of my mind..I can't word it properly..I think a whimper on a loss.I like this poem,Sara...love...Syam
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:59:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, SAra, and I love the way you asked the question at the end: Will the robin reappear? A great symbol!!
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Date: 1/7/2014 10:02:00 PM
Yes, the Robins will reappear someday, country life is too close to nature, something they love, really, it is imbedded within their soul! They really miss the country, the city isn't as great of a place to a country being! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a phenomenal piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/7/2014 7:42:00 PM
A sincere portrait of life: still about the have and the haven't. So poignant to read; some in affluence other without inheritance for children. The poet has just said it the way it is,though touchy ; the real essence of poetry. Prima Sara.
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Date: 1/7/2014 6:28:00 PM
It is sad that many people are leaving the country, for a life in the city. There are many simple pleasures that country life can offer, that just don't exist in cities. I was born a country girl, so I don't think that I could ever live amongst those tall buildings. There is a sadness mixed with the warmth of your words here. Very well expressed, Sara! Thank you very much for your kind visit.
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:28:00 PM
I enjoyed reading what you have written here but it holds a sad truth in the lines i can't denie i grew up near alot of farmers and their way of life has gone to the four winds, now everthing has gone future risktic you know what i mean. it's sad. well done here thank you for the poem. cheri
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