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Raining Cat and Raccoon

```````*****``````` the door, it just stood there till forest ranger knocked to check if widow raccoon was alright. rain was very nasal that night; so she said i’m fine with my woolen frock and lights on, and shut the door and slid on her antique couch. then, a brownie cat from nowhere land jumped through the sill and landed on widow’s lap. brownie cat purred and meowed like a violin in the middle of some broken refrain. she was so pretty and had some scratch. widow raccoon laughed and both had milk with lemon biscuits for midnight snacks…as night stretched longer, brownie took a shower and read nursery rhymes with widow till sweet cat purred more with gentle licks on widow’s prune cheeks. oh, how raccoon flashed a wide grin for the first time in years. facing brownie she said it would be nice to have dear stray cat for keeps… canine pet crooned and purred some more as they slept under tap-taps of rain while tiny stars gently spun away. morning came; brownie danced for her mother widow but sprained her shoulder. i better put some balm on that, raccoon pulled newfound cat near her chest. oh, brownie had a name tag and flea collar around her neck. fluffy kitten couldn’t be hers; they hugged so tight as teary widow dressed up. holding brownie on swaying arms, sad raccoon swooned, it’s time for you to get home, and opened… the door. all rights reserved © ```````````````````` (( for Francine Roberts' " Tell Me About It" ))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2011 2:10:00 PM
I have heard of raining cats and dogs, but this one is very funny a very cute write.
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Date: 4/8/2011 5:20:00 AM
Great story, Nette. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 4/8/2011 5:19:00 AM
Great story, Nette. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 4/6/2011 7:12:00 PM
Great to see your success in Francine's cute contest. Nette, nice take on the picture. Congratulations on your worthy Hm place. Lol, Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/6/2011 2:17:00 PM
ok ok slightly better than me THIS TIME.........racoon swoon........violin with broken refrain........where do these gems come from? from my stock..... ( OK EVERYBODY O N L Y J O K I N G ).......sincerely Jock
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Date: 4/6/2011 2:04:00 PM
Congrats Nette dear friend on your HM in Francine's contest with this awesome creation.. and excellent entry story.. enjoy another great honor all your own luv.. sweet!!! like u..
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:43:00 AM
A nice honest raccoon. Not many of them. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette in Francine Roberts contest "Tell me about it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:16:00 AM
wonderful story penned nette, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:23:00 AM
marvellous(joke) ......... almost (joke) as (joke) good(joke) as(joke) mine ( joke).....Syd (joke)
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Date: 4/5/2011 5:05:00 AM
Hello Nette dear friend ..hope all is well with u luv and u are enjoying a very blessed day ... thinking about u sweets...
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:29:00 PM
This is such a precious tale you made for that picture. I really enjoy your take on it and I hope it does well in the contest, nette!
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:51:00 AM
I see you all found some inspiration while I was not at the Soup this weekend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Nette. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:50:00 AM
I enjoyed a very interesting tale, nette
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:16:00 AM
Aww, I wanted them to stay together, Nette! This is such an entertaining poem and the title made me laugh out loud! I'm sure this will be a winner, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 8:25:00 AM
Cute and cuddly write Nette my friend.. a rousing tale of friendship and fun and care and love ..luv.. good luck in the contest.. I like the way u opened and closed the poem with the door.. sweet .. amazing as always u enthrall me luv..
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Date: 4/4/2011 5:55:00 AM
What a tale Nette dear. Wanted it to go on and on.
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Date: 4/4/2011 4:27:00 AM
Very creative work that tells a great love story..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morning.Thanks for stopping by with uplifting words.Sara
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:27:00 AM
What wondeful imagery, Nette. this is a brilliant entry in to the contest. good luck. Harry
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:02:00 AM
i updated it twice to make sure you got it, dear francine... let me know if it's with you! :) hugggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:23:00 PM
thanks for entering my contest nette, it isn't showing up on the contest page yet, please check that you have entered it
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