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Quietude

Silent voices on the outside of my head inner cries of speechless thoughts tread speaking not of my neat puzzle mere it does no harm to maintain that in here no longer pronouncing idiosyncrasies they're just a hype never felt by guarantees I'll heed my disarm in rhythmic chant quietly through the waves of times pant waking up gets me disoriented with doubt I need not nap and slumber when it's a dark drought receiving compliments I'll agree with gratitude no matter what torrid sounds develop in brood harnessing private reasoning into rooted consent even if subconsciousness is where it stems augment breaking the boundaries of what I expect of myself and living a life of rational progress for once as oneself

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Date: 11/24/2020 2:13:00 AM
This is technically and poetically striking and impressive, Angela. Moments of solitude are necessary for meditation, reorganizing out thoughts, and to recharge our batteries. ~ Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/24/2020 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. I like to sit back and reflect on occasion :)
Date: 11/22/2020 6:03:00 PM
Angie, I adore your artistry, both in your amazing imagery and excellent rhymes. I admire your creative skills and poetic expression.. I especially loved: "I'll heed my disarm in rhythmic chant / quietly through the waves of times pant" - though every line is to be treasured in this gem. Simply stunning! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/22/2020 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, Susan :)
Date: 11/22/2020 5:24:00 AM
We hear and learn much in moments of silence..reflective thoughts, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/22/2020 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 11/21/2020 11:02:00 PM
You live in serenity, nothing can perturb you. Quite is always essential. Great introspective poem. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/22/2020 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Victor :)

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