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Etheree Poetry Contest

I cannot imagine future living without eyes tearing while screams chest develop - no acceptance views sooth me - wanting release for inner peace seems a futile painful endeavor I hear heaven's precious angels crying - relationships worship purpose tainted truth will be lost as dysfunctions grow - artificial intelligence violates all hearts minds souls - it is not progressive but sick aggressive to rape visions choke mankind undo us

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/18/2025 4:30:00 AM

true lines. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/14/2025 1:34:00 AM

Writing AI poems or other things will lead you nowhere. Loved your poem.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/13/2025 4:51:00 PM

CayCay, the future you describe seems possible. To me the danger we face from AI comes when it's given the ability to make decisions and make things happen rather than simply make recommendations. Unfortunately, the military will be using it and who knows what will happen as it's given more and more power. It's like everything else that has the potential to help or to destroy depending on how it is used. Example, curing cancer or engineering biological warfare. It's vital we have good leaders.

John Read

Date: 4/13/2025 10:37:00 AM

They call it progress, I much prefer the old days when nothing was artificial, have a lovely day CayCay. xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/13/2025 4:02:00 AM

Oh, so impressive and expressive. Love this so. God bless you with many more originals. love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/11/2025 12:35:00 PM

The chosen words, harsh, sharp, agonizing and true! Hugs ~ Ki,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2025 12:15:00 AM

This one got better and better as I was reading it. The bottom half is so tight on, Caycay. Sad world we live in today.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2025 7:05:00 PM

Bravo! 1,000%! AI's intentions are not even good! ~ Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2025 1:42:00 AM

- "truth will be lost ... to rape visions choke mankind" ... words of truth, CayCay - Skillfully written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2025 4:32:00 PM

masterpice which can double as a shape/ concrete write...real talk, gripping work , cay...soupie for you