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Prehistoric Advice

We converse and cavort here upright, as the stars twinkle brightly tonight. Then the scent comes on strong, in the morning. So long! Hungry Rex is too eager to bite!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2011 7:22:00 PM

Gerard,.. wow! is this an era waiting to be found.. great limerick... i like the thought and proposition takes when anxious to feed the mind or anything else.. take care,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/1/2011 5:15:00 PM

Love writing bout dinosaurs- This limerick is fun and had strong rhyme. Love the SO LONG-indicates he's outta here! Ready to pound some smaller carnivore! Blessings! gwendolen

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/1/2011 10:37:00 AM

Quite a clever and witty write Gerard, thank you so much for your kindness and for all the smiles you always bring to my face.. Hope your weekend's been good, :) love Wilma

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/1/2011 10:31:00 AM

Gerard very good advice too . Great second line. The so long part ,is brilliant. Anne

James Peranteau

Date: 4/30/2011 5:19:00 AM

A very good Limeric here dear poet, jaunty and filled with, "Hungry" thought ! I like it very much ! In regards them "Skins"....at least we got rid of that Eagles player ! lol Have a great weekend Gerard ! much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2011 11:45:00 PM

hmmm, is this contest still going? I thought it had closed. WEll, if it is still going I hope you do well with it Gerard. It's very clever! Love it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2011 9:50:00 PM

oh, what a roaring write, gerard! you pulled it through, wow! :) huggs, nette