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Poet's Honeymoon Collaboration With Joanna Daniels

POET'S HONEYMOON Pretend we're on a poet's honeymoon Let's dance atop the Massifs on the moon We'll get our fill of Milky Way's champagne Behind a chariot of stars, the twain Each star a stepping stone of Heaven's rune That leads down to a luminous lagoon And when Andromeda begins to wane We'll take our muses to another plane Riding on the shooting star, we will croon Rhapsodying together, hearts in tune Lost in love, our muses will not complain As we set foot in Sombrero's domain Each planet, we'll decorate with festoon And get drenched in Saturn's diamond monsoon Once heights of passion with words, we attain Back to earth, where we can pretend again. Form: Rhyme (10 syllables) 26.03.2023 AABB AABB 10 10 10 10 3/24/23 Daniel Turner Joanna Daniels

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2023 9:57:00 AM

Great write , Daniel, congratulations on your win. Blessings friend

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/11/2023 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Ann Peck

Date: 4/4/2023 2:27:00 PM

Wow, this is so magical! Congratulations on your win, Daniel!

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/4/2023 3:38:00 PM

Thank you, Ann. Isn't imagination a wonderful thing?. How have you been? Everything going your way? Great to see you, Ann. Take care:)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/2/2023 11:38:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win in the contest and to say what a wonderful collaboration it is between you and Jo… Belle

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/2/2023 4:10:00 PM

Thank you, Belle. It was fun to write. Be well.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/31/2023 2:59:00 AM

What a terrificlly penned masterpiece.Daniel and Joanna. Back..well, done. Panagiota.xo. My brief cold went away, thanks, Posting new poems everyday, is not my thing anymore, fouur years of that, burnt me out.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 3:42:00 PM

thank you, Pangie. It was fun! We write, when we write , you know how it works. Take care . Always great to see you.

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/30/2023 1:54:00 PM

congratulations Daniel, well done!

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 2:13:00 PM

Thank you, Frederic. Good to see you again, sir:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/30/2023 7:49:00 AM

Hi Daniel, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Jo's addition worked well with your verses. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis. I appreciate your kindness and support.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/30/2023 7:35:00 AM

Back with huge congratulations on your win and with the lovely addition of Jo's stanzas! :) Alice

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Alice. I appreciate your kindness and support.

Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2023 6:42:00 AM

Simply Beautiful, dear Daniel. Congratulations on your top win !

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 6:56:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa I reall apprecaiate your kindness and support.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/30/2023 6:20:00 AM

I loved this one, DT, congratulations on your win and it was fun collaborating with you:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 6:55:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna. Indeed it was fun. Thank you for the inspiration:) I really love how you finished it:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/26/2023 5:22:00 PM

This is lovely and fun ! :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2023 5:27:00 PM

Thanks Heidi. It's still fun to pretend:) Have a super evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2023 12:27:00 PM

- Sounds heavenly, Daniel ... mine was a completely different flight :))) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2023 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Anne. Probably the airline's fault:) Always good to see you. Be well!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/26/2023 9:58:00 AM

Awesome,. Pangie xo

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2023 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie. Always a pleasure:) Hoping you are well.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2023 9:22:00 AM

Honeymoon or not, whichever plane you are on, Danny, your muse is bound to deliver! Looking forward to see Joanna's addition to these stanzas. ~ Regards // paul

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2023 10:06:00 AM

Thank you Paul Your kind comments are much appreciated. Have a super evening my friend. (7 hours difference. It is noon here)

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/26/2023 8:46:00 AM

Dear Daniel, dreamy imagery spills with romantic beauty from your golden pen. My heart's imagination is intoxicated on this potent poetic enchantment. Love it! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2023 10:01:00 AM

Hello Susan. Great to see you again. I appreciate your kind support. Have a super Sunday.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/25/2023 9:20:00 PM

This is great. I feel as if you summoned your inner Ray Bradbury or Isaac Asimov for this one, Daniel. Simply stellar! :) gw

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thank you, GW. Always happy to see you. Have a super Sunday my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/25/2023 1:07:00 PM

An uplifting and inspiring poem, dearest friend, Daniel. Your Muse, certainly, is in a great mood. Good luck. Blessings!

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios. I'm rarely in a bad mood, just happy to be alive:) Great to see you my friend. Let's do it again, soon:) Be well my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/25/2023 8:53:00 AM

Wow! Daniel, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I found it to be dreamy, magical, and poetic. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 9:23:00 AM

Well hello Alexis. Long time no see. Thank you so much. I hope life has been treating you well. Have a great weekend yourself:)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/25/2023 8:44:00 AM

Beautiful beginnings, romantically linked to the skies. I love! Alice :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Alice. I hope you are having a big Texas kinda weekend. Are you bar b quing brisket? It's gorgeous here today. talk at you later:)

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/25/2023 8:15:00 AM

An engaging poem. I love the surreal imagery. FAV

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Suzette. I really appreciate your time and support. Have a wonderful weekend.

Deb M

Date: 3/25/2023 7:18:00 AM

Really lovely Daniel….l especially like the first two lines of the second paragraph! Debx

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 7:36:00 AM

Thank you, Deb. I appreciate your time and your support. Always great to see you. I hope your weekend is a good one:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/25/2023 6:01:00 AM

Your poetic prowess shines in this write, Daniel. Splendid imagination--so well done!

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate your kind comments and your support. Have a wonderful weekend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2023 5:57:00 AM

I like the way you used the descriptive lines comparing being out in space to the out in space feelings(LOL) of being newlywed on a honeymoon. My honeymoon wasn't like what people do today on very expensive honeymoons, but it was not like some who get married and get up and go back to work the next day either. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 6:16:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Sara. Nor was mine. I appreciate you stopping to read and comment. Be well and have a nice relaxing weekend. Should be beautiful weather:)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/25/2023 3:34:00 AM

I love honeymoons especially when it involves poets and poetry, it can't be none else but beauty, :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 6:14:00 AM

Thank you, Rose. I appreciate your support. Hope you are doing well and having a super weekend:)

Arlo Parker

Date: 3/24/2023 9:27:00 PM

Baffo, DT!! ~;o)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/27/2023 3:23:00 PM

LOL I knew what you meant. I think I know you.

Arlo Parker
Date: 3/26/2023 5:24:00 PM

How about: great write!...

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/25/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thank you, Arlo. I guess baffo is a good thing:) I appreciate you dropping by to read and comment. Have a great weekend.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/24/2023 8:03:00 PM

We can all pretend all we like. Who is going to stop us. Everyday I pretend I’m the happiest person on earth. Just so people around me can be happy too. Fantastic poem, Danny. :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/24/2023 8:06:00 PM

Good on you, Fin. My kind of guy:) I appreciate your kindness and your admirable attitude. Have a top shelf weekend my friend.