Peach Fields

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When peach fields become lavender, birds sing love melodies Last year's nests are made over, plowed fields are ready to plant Will you think of me in my spring dress giving you a hug

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 1:25:00 PM

This is so pretty, Sara. Thanks for entering my contest with your lovely sijo. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2024 2:56:00 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea for stopping by to let me know I placed and give me a nice review. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/20/2024 9:01:00 AM

Sara, A haunting magnum opus hovers elegantly over the page. I can imbibe the invigorating scene and the sentiment which underpins it. Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2024 11:51:00 AM

Why, Howard. Your review is uplifting. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2024 11:43:00 AM

oooh lovely imagery, especially the first line.. Is this the one?? I think so..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 5:01:00 PM

SO, yes, finally. I think so. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/17/2024 8:57:00 AM

Oh my, this is one of the most beautiful sijo poems I've read so far.. So magically done, dear Sara! Your wordsmithery feels so elegant and effortless here, flowing with a lovely rhythm and mystical fragrance.. "When peach fields become lavender, birds sing love melodies" Ahh, I really like that opening.. So wonderful! "Will you think of me in my spring dress ready to hug you" There's a soulful & heartfelt essence in these lines.. So touching and evocative. I really loved reading this, a FAV :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 9:52:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya, for faving it and with a smiley face. I am glad you express such high regards for it. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/17/2024 6:15:00 AM

so nice and touching poem, with harmony of colors, enjoyed

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 7:11:00 AM

Why, thank you, Yann for the nice comment. Sara K