Paradox

PARADOX ———- old-age time on ice PRESTO in a n’er-ending winter — well…almost — (c) sally young eslinger 1/15/23

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2023 12:20:00 PM

A fun/cute write. I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day..............

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/18/2023 7:54:00 PM

I've thought that winter runs on football time - if you're not familiar with it, two minutes of play time can last a half hour in real time, due to replays, time outs, coaches challenges, injuries, etc~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2023 2:13:00 PM

a good one, Sally Thanks for your visit to my poetry.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/15/2023 8:08:00 AM

Saly your expertise as a writer sparkles throughout this poem. Remarkable in its uniqueness and creative quality.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/15/2023 11:18:00 AM

Yo! Sotto! I did know whereofbi was hoping to speak. Felt like flipping pancakes to get 17 syllables there…hmm. But my heartfelt thanks for your lovely comment. Humbling, indeed…hugs & blessings on you new week! sally

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2023 6:26:00 AM

Interesting idea penned. Winter will end we just don't know when. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/15/2023 10:53:00 AM

Sara, it’s long used metaphor the winter is the season of death…even ss a metaphor for our known, possibly…which gives here the metaphor and the paradox, to mildly summarize