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Old Age and Ache

Old age and ache Foot on brake pad The shake stressing Tibia’s throb The knees nob and Hobnob ankle twinge Perhaps the doc Takes off sock and It’s all a crock No thank you pain Be no cane or Slight strain of pace

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/14/2024 5:50:00 AM

Kim Em bones become a problem as we are getting older, but you are still young my friend.. We retired into A retirement village a couple of years ago, for safety more than anything else but getting older and old is certainly not for sissys. Horrible to think that a broken bone in my early sixties, is now several years later, bothering me. Well penned my friend. love and hugs, Jennifer. .

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer! Our body speaks… Squeezy hugs!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/13/2024 1:18:00 PM

Getting old is not for wimps, is it! Well done, Kim. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2024 2:09:00 PM

Apparently not…lol

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2024 5:16:00 AM

Aches and pains all over. Doctor says: what can you expect at 84 years?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2024 10:11:00 AM

I bet! Gentle hugs ~ Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2024 5:04:00 AM

its no fun getting older is it Kim, but at least we can write on the subject and others can relate:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2024 10:18:00 AM

write about things yes i agree, poetry has got me through the toughest years of my life and it is like my 'diary in some cases, i know how cathartic writing has been for me and it will continue to be especially now - at the end of the day nobody knows what we are going through in life and why we feel the need to write and post poetry. BUT to have your poem limit restricted as instigated by some folk who seldom even post on soup is so unfair, at least you post regularly Kim not like some of the others!!! hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2024 10:11:00 AM

Best way to relieve the stress, write about it, well after praying ;)

John Read

Date: 10/13/2024 4:43:00 AM

As we reach old age we sadly become like casualties of war. Hang on in there Kim.xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2024 10:12:00 AM

It is not that bad but a funny metaphor. Hugs

Karen Jones

Date: 10/12/2024 9:03:00 PM

I am so in awe of your ability to write in so many forms! This one gives voice to the dilemma of the pains of aging and is very poignant!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2024 10:14:00 AM

It is fun to write in different forms, some more difficult than others. Who knows how well we do but we attempt to get it right. Some forms involve more than the syllable and rhymes but we try :) Thank you, Karen!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/12/2024 7:45:00 PM

.....and you keep going, anyway! This is a mature write that I respect- even respect you for pains that come with age. It's so predictable sometimes that you can be feeling something and the doctor doesn't know where it's coming from! Hats off to you, dear lady! <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2024 8:17:00 PM

Bless you, my sweet friend!