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dusky marmalade drips onto the horizon eyes feast hungrily fiery embers glow painted with swirling brushstrokes artistry of God waxing crescent moon peeps through rich tangerine clouds dream time approaches Contest: October Sky Sponsor: SKAT 08-23-15

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James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2015 2:12:00 PM

Now this is dreamy delicious poetry ~ mmmm ~ James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 6:07:00 PM

:-) aww you are too kind my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2015 12:23:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Jan. The many worthy entries must have made this contest a hard one to judge. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 1:47:00 PM

Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 12:07:00 AM

Jan, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 3:35:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/31/2015 10:27:00 AM

Beautiful write Jan...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 11:34:00 AM

Thanks as ever for your support Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 8/31/2015 9:03:00 AM

Love this Jan, it is all beautiful but the first Haiku is exceptional. My mouth is watering.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 9:20:00 AM

That's my favourite too James:-) hugs Jan xx

Shrineetee Kar

Date: 8/31/2015 8:13:00 AM

Awesome words. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thanks Shrineetee:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 8/31/2015 7:26:00 AM

Very beautiful. One of my favorites.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 9:19:00 AM

Thanks so much Michael - I try my best but can never place high with this sponsor - hey ho i won't be deterred:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/31/2015 5:06:00 AM

Wonderful string of haikus Jan! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!Thnx for visits to my page.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 5:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2015 2:21:00 PM

- Jan, this is a really beautiful image for October - I wish you good luck in the contest, hope you will win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise I have seen some wonderful entries into the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/25/2015 2:12:00 PM

Jan, another great piece of artwork awesome a winner. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2015 2:20:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2015 12:41:00 PM

Great imagery and colorful hues in this write Jan...nicely done...hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Joseph I have seen some lovely entries - still love the imagery of pumpkin skies:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2015 3:46:00 PM

My dear Jan, you nailed this one from every direction! What gorgeous imagery! This is one that will go straight to the top of the winners chart! Excellent haiku- beautifully done and a 7! Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 4:07:00 PM

Thanks Pandita - I have seen some lovely entries will just wait and see:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/24/2015 2:55:00 PM

I'm not a big fan of haiku poetry but if I were this poem would be one I'd wish I could write..good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 4:07:00 PM

Thanks Frederic that is a very kind thing to say - my son won't even read them he say they are not proper poems!:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Martin

Date: 8/24/2015 2:06:00 PM

Picturesque. It does not need the photos.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 2:07:00 PM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Howard Dion

Date: 8/24/2015 6:36:00 AM

Jan, I like this. Very well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 6:46:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Howard:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2015 4:38:00 AM

Superbly divine, dear Jan! A seven for each! Wow!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 5:21:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Ian Jones

Date: 8/24/2015 3:54:00 AM

Lovely flavours and imagery Jan. Best of luck in the contest. Kind regards, Ian

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 3:55:00 AM

Thanks Ian:-) hugs jan xx

David Meade

Date: 8/23/2015 9:32:00 PM

OK, one word, AWESOME! 7

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 2:51:00 AM

aww you are too kind David:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/23/2015 9:20:00 PM

I so love your drizzling sky haiku..They definitely touch the senses...Love the tangerine clouds..

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 2:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Charma:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 8/23/2015 8:12:00 PM

Wow a real winner. The other contestants are lucky I'm not the judge. Wonderful write. Picasso, and Monet envy Gods talent......

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 8:14:00 PM

Oh you are too kind Michael :-)I have seen some stunning entries I just write and hope for the best:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 8/23/2015 8:05:00 PM

Jan, love the dusky marmalade line in your poem and of course the tangerine( I used that in mine also) beautifully penned by a wonderful poet, a7 and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 8:07:00 PM

Oh thanks for the lovely comment I have seen some lovely poems I think Skat will have fun judging this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 8/23/2015 6:40:00 PM

No 2 for me.....all is good....

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 6:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Judy:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/23/2015 6:14:00 PM

I agree with Paul on number one but they all are delightful...good luck

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 6:15:00 PM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2015 6:07:00 PM

Excellent take on this topic, Jan. All 3 haiku drip with delightful imagery, yet allow me a preference for no1 :) Jan...in a serious and inspired poetic mood. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 6:08:00 PM

Thanks for your positive comment Paul I just hope Skat likes them:-) hugs Jan xx