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Nutcrackers Last Waltz

Upon a high, cobwebbed bookcase there lay a forlorn nutcracker who once adorned a cheery face but amiss now shiny lacquer. A coat of green he loved to preen now musty, fading, lacking gleam. Afore, stood proud on duty to ward off bad spirits from his home as folklore stories told, he knew, to keep sentry against a tome. To watch over those that dwelt there and guard a young girl in his care. Many adventures they would share through years of magical play and fun - castle, a prince and dragons lair, a fairy with sugar plum hair. Around they would waltz with such glee until moon set its shadows free. With each strike of grandfather clock in a pirouette, years danced away. Dust now covered the once loved frock as nutcracker peered down to pray. He wished just one more time to dance with his friend if only by perchance. Upon one snowy winter’s eve an overture played with candles lit and in magical disbelief another fairytale could be writ. For nutcracker’s prayer indeed heard as a miracle thus occurred. Around he waltzed in sheer delight with his lady friend full of grace. Her dress in flight like a bright kite she held him against her rosy face. No longer forlorn and filled with glee more adventures ahead he could see …

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Date: 5/21/2024 3:43:00 PM
Hello Christina Bowring, I love this poem. i love T. he Nutcracker. I have aq small one i use to hang on a tree. Now I have it on my mirror. i also have the music. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 5/22/2024 10:15:00 AM
Hello Christina, Oh you are welcome. I have always loved the Nutcracker. i have seen the ballet. When it is close to Christmas , i listen to the nutcracker. My fav. classical music. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/22/2024 3:35:00 AM
Hello dear Darlene. I’m so thrilled dear friend that you loved this poem. I did have fun writing it ! I enjoyed researching The Nutcracker. I must buy myself one too to hang on the tree. Thank you so much for faving it. I’m honoured and you put a big smile on my face. Thank you for sharing the nutcracker story with me :) Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 5/20/2024 5:52:00 PM
Loved the last waltz, flowed well and liked the ending
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Date: 3/11/2024 10:12:00 PM
Christmas seems an age away now, but I still loved reading this poem. It has all the sentiment and love and a wonderful story arc. Delightful formating, Christina Sx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 3/13/2024 1:05:00 AM
Dear Sam, thank you so much for reading this poem my lovely friend. I’m so glad that you enjoyed reading it. My pen took me on a little magical journey and I think so far, this was one of my favourites to write. I was enthralled when researching the nutcracker story. We all need a little magic in our lives. Thank you for your valued comments. So appreciated. Have a great day x :)
Date: 12/30/2023 4:29:00 PM
A wonderful poem and a joy to read! This is perfect for the Christmas season ... Very well written, Christina :)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/31/2023 8:29:00 AM
Dear Kelly, thank you so much for your visit and such uplifting comments. So gratefully received. Thank you. A very happy New Year to you xx :):)
Date: 12/29/2023 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A wonderful write/story/great ending. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/29/2023 9:33:00 AM
Hello Paula.Thank you so much for your comments and congratulations. That’s so sweet. I’ve just noticed yours on there so I’m off to read it now. Happy 2024! Xx :):)
Date: 12/20/2023 3:37:00 PM
Wow, what a magical, captivating story you created, and I love the heart warming ending! A truly delightful read for me tonight :-) On to read more of your poems now. Smiles, Anne :-)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/21/2023 12:07:00 AM
Dear Anne, another lovely, happy visit from you. Your comments are so heartwarming and put a glow in my heart and a big smile upon my face. Thank you so very much. I so appreciate it. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
Date: 12/17/2023 6:23:00 AM
Such beautiful images and a magical Christmas poem, Christina: I could see them dancing through your words. Have a wonderful Christmas , Luv, SuZ
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/17/2023 9:10:00 AM
Dear Suz, thank you so very much for your lovely visit. So appreciate your heartwarming comments. So kind. I wish you too a very happy, wonderful Christmas. Luv and hugs xx
Date: 12/15/2023 8:09:00 AM
Wonderful storytelling. A brilliant piece.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/15/2023 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so very much Richard for your lovely visit and such uplifting comments. So appreciated. Wishing you a great weekend. :):)
Date: 12/8/2023 4:40:00 PM
This is a magical and wonderful write Christina, I am faving. I love it so much; I am going to read it to my grandkids! Such a sweet story <3
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/9/2023 3:35:00 AM
Dear BJ, my heartfelt thanks to you for such a wonderful, uplifting visit. I am so delighted and equally thrilled reading your comments and honoured as well for faving it. Thank you so, so much! It has brought such joy to me to know that you are going to read it to your beautiful grandchildren. It means so much as I had children in mind when I wrote this little nutcracker tale so another dream has come true! You have brought much light to a dark, rainy day. Much gratitude and hugs to you xx :):)
Date: 12/7/2023 7:02:00 PM
You express the nutcracker's joy of rising from dust to bliss so delightfully Christina. It's hard not to hear the Nutcracker Suite in the background.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/8/2023 1:20:00 AM
Hello Robert. Lovely to have you visit. Thank you so much for leaving such encouraging comments which I enjoyed reading. So appreciative. I must listen to the beautiful music. Hope you are keeping well. Blessings to you. :):)
Date: 12/7/2023 1:01:00 PM
A joyous Christmas worth of the festivities. Blessings
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/7/2023 3:10:00 PM
Many thanks to you dear Victor for your visit and uplifting comments. So appreciated. Hope you are keeping well. Many blessings to you.
Date: 12/7/2023 8:22:00 AM
Curious. I read through your poem a few times then some keywords clicked: nutcracker, sugar plum, dance. Aah - Nutcracker suite, sugar plum fairy. Brilliant. Many thanks for sharing this. Tony
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/7/2023 10:49:00 AM
Thank you greatly for your visit Tony and your well observed comments. Great observation my friend. Yes, you are quite right - I researched a nutcracker which led on to the ballet of nutcracker and thought I’d throw a few elements of it into the poem. I found it all quite enchanting and really enjoyed bringing him to life. Now, I’m thinking I wouldn't mind seeing it being performed! Thank you so much for your insightful thoughts. Hope your keeping well and warm. Blessings to you :):)
Date: 12/7/2023 2:06:00 AM
- A wonderful poem that creates images and feelings for the reader ... love it ... so glad I chose to read this today, thank you very much, Christina :) - hugs
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/7/2023 7:22:00 AM
Dear Anne- Lise, such a wonderful visit from you. Thank you so much for reading the poem and leaving such happy, uplifting comments that has illuminated a very dark, rainy day. Heartfelt thanks my lovely and big smiles and hugs :):)
Date: 12/6/2023 2:41:00 PM
I am so impressed Christina. I saw the ballet, the Nutcracker years ago and I heard its music as i read your work. A FAV. Pangie xxxx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/6/2023 3:57:00 PM
Dear Pangie, such a sweet visit from you my lovely. Thank you so, so much for your heartwarming comments. I researched this ballet a little before commencing the little nutcracker and found it to be quite enchanting. Made me want to see it being performed too. How lovely that you got to see and enjoy it. Thank you hugely for faving it - I’m so thrilled and honoured and it’s made my night. Much appreciation. Hugs and smiles to you dear, poetic friend xxx :):)
Date: 12/5/2023 6:45:00 PM
A beautiful Christmas story. Loved the imagery. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/6/2023 2:08:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Judy for your visit and such an uplifting response to the poem. So appreciated. Have a wonderful day my friend and blessings to you. Xx
Date: 12/4/2023 10:01:00 PM
A lovely Personification, Christina, a FAV for my list! A wonderful uplifting tale of dreams coming true in a loving way. Thanks for sharing the good news in life with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/5/2023 6:48:00 AM
Dear Bill thank you so much for your wonderful visit. So lovely to read your heartwarming comments and an extra big thank you for putting it on your fav list! I am so thrilled and it’s made my day. Thank you! Much blessings to you both.
Date: 12/4/2023 5:13:00 PM
A sweet romantic tale full of imagery and dreams come true. I enjoyed reading. Happy holidays to you. SuZ
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/4/2023 10:18:00 PM
My grateful thanks to you Suz for reading the poem and leaving lovely comments. I’m so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you. Happy holidays to you too :)
Date: 12/4/2023 8:54:00 AM
A Scottish town comes alive every 100 years, Brigadoon. Christina you've reminded of this tale. A joy that never really dies despite passing of time, like your personification. Enjoyed, Robert
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/4/2023 10:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert for your visit and very interesting thoughts. So glad you enjoyed it. Much appreciated. Blessings to you.
Date: 12/3/2023 1:22:00 PM
Excellent personification and your choice of words add depth to this one... very clever.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/3/2023 2:42:00 PM
Dear SO, I most gratefully thank you for reading the poem and for such encouraging, very appreciated comments. Thank you so much. Blessings to you for a great week.
Date: 12/3/2023 12:55:00 PM
Awww this is a real soul warmer Christina! Just lovely to read my sweet new friend! Debx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/3/2023 2:34:00 PM
Hello my lovely! So nice to have you visit. Heartfelt thanks to you with much gratitude. I did enjoy bringing him to life especially at this time of year. I’ll be back to visit you again very soon my lovely, sweet friend. Have a wonderful week. Big hugs xx
Date: 12/3/2023 12:34:00 PM
So sweet and nostalgic. I hope she returns for the dance again and again
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/3/2023 2:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. Very appreciated. I think the little nutcracker will waltz on with her forever. I do like happy endings! :)
Date: 12/3/2023 7:36:00 AM
This poem has special meaning. I am at the end of my last career and sometimes feel like I am on a shelf. Often in important work, there are people above who don't pay attention to what we have learned in life as to be really important. I tell myself "oh well" and do hope (much like the character of your poem) that there will be some kind of realization on the part of those in charge about what really matters in life. Your allegorical poem is quite telling for me and makes me think to hope.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/4/2023 1:57:00 AM
My heartfelt thanks to you Duke and complete understanding when reading your comments. It touched me greatly and how I agree with you! It also touched me knowing that the poem resonated with you. Experience very often gets ignored especially at the place of work but how precious it is and what others can learn from it. From life itself. Keep on believing in yourself and keep dreaming my friend .. Much hope and blessings to you .
Date: 12/2/2023 6:22:00 PM
Such a gorgeious and delightful tale of a wonderful journey to a dream my dear poet friend. It warmth my heart reading this stunning write of yours this morning. The flow and rhymes are so good and everything. You're an amazing poet. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem and your wonderful talent in poetry. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/2/2023 11:56:00 PM
Dear sweet Len, what a wonderful visit from you that has brought so many smiles. My heartfelt gratitude for reading the poem and leaving such a supportive response. I’m so happy that it warmed your heart as it does mine when I hear from you and read your wonderful poems. Thank you so much sweet one. Hugs and blessings always and I wish you a peaceful Sunday. Xx :):)
Date: 12/2/2023 2:05:00 PM
Your charming tale of faith and wonder was quite beautiful, Christina. We are always in need of words that inspire.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/2/2023 3:23:00 PM
Dear Sotto, how lovely to have you visit and receive your so appreciated supportive comments. Thank you so very much . I am so delighted to receive them. Many blessings to you my inspiring friend. :):)
Date: 12/2/2023 1:17:00 PM
I completely enjoyed your delightful Christmasy tale of prayer and a miracle, and a dream come true. This is a fave, my friend. :) <3
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/2/2023 3:14:00 PM
Dear Evelyn, my sweet friend, thank you gratefully for your visit and heartwarming response to the poem. I am so thrilled and happy that you enjoyed it. Another big thank you for faving it - I am so honoured and delighted. Brought such great joy to me this evening. Thank you! Blessings and love to you xx :):)
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