Nature's Storm

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an inward battle anxiety leads to stress then acid reflux Edward J. Ebbs - February 9, 2016 Written for a Contest, Haiku 102

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2016 5:34:00 PM

that 's great comparing it to acid reflux!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/12/2016 8:47:00 AM

Very well done Edward... you took me by surprise there! Nature's storm indeed! Brilliant 575 SENRYU. Best wishes, Keith

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/10/2016 8:39:00 PM

Ha haaaH! This is so funny! Great job, Ed :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/10/2016 2:48:00 PM

oh so true Ed:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/10/2016 7:28:00 AM

It must have been some battle, my friend, Edward. Certain am I , victorious you have emerged out of this! Excellent!