Mystery Girl

Our eyes meet, and the temperature is rising 
When we're standing so near, there's no disguising 
I don't know what to say, your a princess, I am clay

Yeah, opposites attract, I'm not even denying 
You've got ahold on me, without even trying 
This boy begins to pray, light up my life today

Sure you've got it all, but not so good at hiding 
Feel the chemistry, just let go and stop fighting 
I'm not going away, you body language says stay

I'm the oxygen in the air, your longing to be breathing
I see your smile, but in your heart there's a needing
Night explodes into day, when love can have its way

Hey sweet mystery girl, your beautiful face I'm reading
I think it's so very clear, your defenses I'm defeating
This dreamer's wish today, be free and fly away..

To me!

~Lyric Man

Note: They are opposites and she's so mysterious, but one thing this guy knows is chemistry.. and they have it!  This upbeat pop lyric is about two racing hearts.. One we all see and another only he can catch.
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Date: 7/23/2018 10:46:00 PM
G'day Lyric Man … yep, opposites do attract each other possibly to find out what makes them different. Certainly the feel of a bouncy song - Lindsay
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Date: 6/26/2018 12:27:00 PM
Aw so sweet beautiful words
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:36:00 AM
None can surpass your pen when composing lyric poetry/songs. I found and married my mystery girl fourteen years ago my friend, has been a blessing every day since. A fav is this uplifting gem...
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:20:00 AM
That would make a great song
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Date: 6/12/2018 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, it was written as a song actually.
Date: 6/12/2018 12:02:00 AM
I think Carole said it exactly like I would have lol. Seriously though, I was always accused of being aloof and mysterious, when I was only being shy. Great lyric Chance, truly enjoyed....Maria
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Date: 6/12/2018 10:19:00 PM
Oh, stay mysterious.. it's incredibly attractive!
Date: 6/10/2018 8:25:00 PM
Oh, I'd love to hear this as a song, Chance. Sometimes when men think women are being mysterious, they are really just a bit shy. Glad that doesn't stop you from pursuit. An invigorating, romantic write! Hugs, Carolyn
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:24:00 PM
Call it what you will but I love it.. thank you for your kind words!
Date: 6/10/2018 6:10:00 PM
very cool lyrics!! Upbeat and positive. Romantic! I like this a lot, Chance, and thanks for your sweet comment on my poem.
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:25:00 PM
Wow.. humbled by your generous words!
Date: 6/10/2018 1:34:00 PM
- Beautiful romantic moment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:23:00 PM
You make me smile.. a lot :) Thank you!
Date: 6/9/2018 3:16:00 AM
Well written piece Chance. Are you a musician?. Tom
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:27:00 PM
Actually I am :)
Date: 6/9/2018 1:25:00 AM
Oh yeah...I hear your music. Sing to me. lol
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:02:00 PM
Great lyric Chance, it would make a good song....good write....Donna
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:28:00 PM
Happy thoughts!!!
Date: 6/8/2018 7:03:00 PM
Nice...I like it...It has rhythm and flow...All the best Chance Summer
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:30:00 PM
You are more than kind!
Date: 6/8/2018 5:17:00 PM
Another fabulous lyric Chance, i especially love 'I'm the oxygen in the air, your longing to be breathing I see your smile, but in your heart there's a needing'. would love to hear this set to music, I'd love to hear it if its ever recorded!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:31:00 PM
Or maybe in person.. hey, a guy can dream ;)
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