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My Own Proverb

“ Love is the greatest portion of our lives, although sex is hidden in love as a twinkling star”. Proverb by - Ravi Sathasivam

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/15/2014 12:20:00 AM

This one great. Yes sex may be likened to a flavoring agent. Love Ravi...write on..LOVE XXXX rajat

Holly Moore

Date: 12/9/2012 9:54:00 AM

You're right about love, nice flow...I like it...Thanks for commenting on my page...Hugs, Holly

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/5/2012 11:13:00 AM

.... .and so we try to star gaze as much as humanly possible. Nice proverb!! gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2012 11:16:00 AM

really enjoy this one so am seeing it again.

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/21/2012 11:49:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/13/2012 4:21:00 PM

Interesting thoughts penned..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:55:00 AM

Thanks

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 5:50:00 PM

Never thought of it quite that way Ravi but who's to say it is not true. I like the thought and feel the beauty of stars makes your verse so real.

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM

Thanks

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 2:57:00 PM

i like this too Ravi....

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM

Thanks

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2012 11:13:00 PM

Very nice, Ravi!! If it's for Debs, I think she will love it.

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM

Thanks Andrea