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My Hot Water Bottle Metaphorically

My source of gain for each day is so soothing and warm of heart this holds me up no matter what fully satisfying in no small part This bottle has ca spiritual dimension effecting my soul so very much keeping it filled to the brim trusting for that divine touch There's a constant boiling need being red hot temperature-wise touching inside your lukewarmness pour out the heat before it dies Looking in as the bottle's filling it's literally so full of steam portraying spiritual power within now that's something you can dream When your skin touches that heat so soothing like His divine presence bringing a real glow inside my HWB makes a lot of sense

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Date: 11/18/2021 11:51:00 AM
- As always ... I enjoy your beautiful poems, Gordon :) - (I'm not that often on the soup at the moment, but everything is fine ... this month I've been here for 10 years ... time flies :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/18/2021 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, Glad you enjoyed this one, congratulations on your 10 years anniversary. Hugs and blessings,Gordon
Date: 11/17/2021 11:21:00 AM
Nice rhyme poem Gordon. My wife is in bed right now enjoying the pleasures of a HWB. I'm doing the filling and refilling, lol. A poet friend, Bill
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/17/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Bill, Glad you enjoyed this one, would you believe it our wives are the same enjoying our benefits as I also fill the bottles up. Have a great week, Gordon
Date: 11/16/2021 12:59:00 PM
Hi! Gordon loved the rhythm with this poem. Debbie
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/16/2021 1:27:00 PM
Hi Debbie, Glad you loved the rhythm shown here, Have a blessed day, Gordon
Date: 11/16/2021 9:05:00 AM
There is nothing like relaxing, gentle, radiant heat. I love this splendid, metaphorical rhyme. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 11/16/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Evelyn, Glad you loved this piece and found it an enjoyable read. Have a blessed day,Gordon
Date: 11/16/2021 8:58:00 AM
Strange I never used a ht water bottle. But there's more meaning to HWB/ A lovely poem full of meaning.
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Date: 11/16/2021 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Victor, You must live in a hot climate, in a Scottish winter you need plenty of heat at night. Thanks for your kind words and pleased you enjoyed it. Blessings,Gordon
Date: 11/15/2021 1:49:00 PM
what a DIVINE metaphor . I love feeling one of these on myself, but last time that was, I think as a child!! Great poem.
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Date: 11/15/2021 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Andrea , Glad that you enjoyed this piece so much and trust life is good with you, blessings,Gordon
Date: 11/15/2021 8:13:00 AM
This is such a warm and soothing piece reminding us all that the comfort of the Hoy Spirit is alike a hot water bottle to our cold spirit. Wonderful stuff. Loved it. A fave for me. God Bless and stay well my friend. JB
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/15/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Judy, Glad you enjoyed this piece even loving it and so encouraged to make it your fave. Hope all is well at your end, Blessings always, Gordon
Date: 11/14/2021 2:06:00 PM
Soothing and warm of heart indeed. Much comfort conveyed in these metaphorical verses, Gordon.
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Date: 11/15/2021 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, Glad you enjoyed this one. Blessings, Gordon

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