My Darling Beau

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Written 14th March 2025

Write five beautiful lines, poetry contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France

Love is alike the green grass of home, in heart and mind where’er one may roam. Quote - Poet’s own Moonlight and roses remind me of you Birdsong in the morning and sunshine too The rain when it falls and soft winds that blow All things are heightened upon the earth’s show Love has changed everything, my darling beau.

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David Crandall

Date: 3/24/2025 3:16:00 PM

Beautiful lines Beryl!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/24/2025 5:00:00 PM

Thank you David… Beryl

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2025 7:37:00 AM

Lovely write Beryl, best wishes

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/22/2025 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Joseph, much appreciated… Beryl

Ink Empress

Date: 3/19/2025 12:02:00 PM

Awn this is so beautiful! Made me smile and my soul warm dear beryl! How sweet and beautiful is the way youv woven this poem, and the rhymes as always are so sublime! I really love the cadence and poetic nature of your word weaving and how you always express in such a sincere and soulful manner! Every word in this is stunning! Best wishes if for a contest. Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/22/2025 7:51:00 PM

Thank you Ink, your lovely reply has given me a much needed lift. I truly appreciate every word… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/17/2025 3:45:00 AM

A great win. One could almost sing this poem.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/22/2025 7:49:00 PM

Thank you Victor, that’s a nice thought, to sing these words… Beryl

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/15/2025 6:09:00 PM

Beryl, super nice! This feeling is what makes life worth living! Smiles!! I can see why people come and read your work on a regular basis. I should try to be a better follower too!!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/15/2025 9:36:00 PM

Thank you Duke, very much appreciated. There are many fantastic poets writing on the soup, but not enough time in the day to read and comment on them all, as much as we’d like too… Beryl