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I just stood bewildered, staring Specks of the sky slowly pass through the glass Adding a frosty sheen to the scene A soft, creamy dew passes through. A boy standing by a mothball light The dark entrance of nature exposed The darkly hidden entrance of the mind You may be in a slump, so Don't muse about relying on this. How the spindle works It's different now, and it's pell-mell Yet, notions have left my mind My feelings and views are scattered On my face, a faint answer shows.
Written: January 8, 2022

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Date: 1/9/2023 10:02:00 AM
Very interesting. Yes, definitely alcohol can affect how things are seen.
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Date: 1/9/2023 5:22:00 AM
Your first stanza sets the stage for your poem with lovely images. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 1/9/2023 2:19:00 AM
You have the ability of great meditation with great imagery.
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