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Mums Ordeal - Contest Lets Do Some Alphabet

Anxiously waiting trying not to clock watch Baleful noise breaks the silence, Calmness disappears, Distraught, sons first school day Excitement as flying body flings himself at her, at home time Penned October 1 2017 Contest : Sara Kendrick ....let's do some alphabet Based on own friends ordeal

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 11/11/2017 7:03:00 AM

If memory serves me right, I behaved the same way on my first day of school many many years ago, but I quickly got over it took to learning. Congratulations on your win, and thank you for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2017 11:51:00 AM

Ahhh!!! I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/11/2017 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Serena.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 10:47:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Seren - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2017 4:35:00 PM

aww this is so perfectly described Seren I am sure many mum's can relate to this exact scene! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/1/2017 6:20:00 PM

Usually the mom breaks open the wine when the little ones head off for the first day

Darren White

Date: 10/1/2017 1:03:00 PM

Love the flying flings :) And yeah can imagine that ordeal... Good luck in the contest.