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Moving Day

I jotted the number down with a pen called and set the date of time and when two men and a truck finally showed up outside my door stood two stick figured men 7-6-18

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B. Joseph Fitzsimons

Date: 5/8/2023 9:36:00 PM

Im not sure what this is about because I can think of too many reasons but for my reason, reading this poem was a massive coincidence for what I was thinking about. What is was isnt important but ao really enjoy this work and think you have a really tough grasp on the art of saying a lot in little words. I admire this poem, thanks!

Judy Ball

Date: 1/7/2021 10:16:00 AM

This brought a smile to my face. Well done my friend. Keep posting. God |Bless, JB

Silent One

Date: 10/25/2020 1:48:00 PM

Hey long time no see.. hope you are well

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/20/2019 1:47:00 AM

Oh,man ... this funny poem brought a big boy grin, Che. I do miss your hilarious musing. Hope all is well w/you. Love and more love always.

Hannah Borke

Date: 10/8/2018 9:50:00 AM

I'm wondering why you stopped posting and why Mike Hauser stopped posting

Pat Adams

Date: 8/2/2018 7:29:00 AM

I like this Cheryl, made me laugh!!!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/2/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; I'm glad you enjoyed it and got a chuckle out of it my poetic friend!~Che :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/12/2018 6:56:00 AM

Lol!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/12/2018 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for visit and glad you chuckle out of it Mike!~Che :)

Elaine George

Date: 7/11/2018 4:18:00 AM

Good one, Cheryl!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/11/2018 8:26:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Elaine; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/8/2018 7:53:00 AM

Excellent limerick my friend. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/11/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ravi; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2018 3:15:00 PM

- You need Muscle men at your service, Cheryl :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/11/2018 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anne-Lise; so true needing muscles rather than stick arms lol!~Che :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/6/2018 11:10:00 PM

Lol! Your humor never fails to give me giggles, Cheryl. A wonderful limerick! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/7/2018 8:55:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan; glad you got chuckle out of it! I know a lot of folks probably haven't seen the 2 men and a truck company logo and wonder what I mean by stick figured men! Warmest wishes to you too my poetic friend~Che :)

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 10:06:00 PM

Yikes.. so much for the heavy stuff ;). Nice Limerick, Cheryl!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/7/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Lyric Man; I really appreciate it!~Che :)