Home » Poems » Hiya Sharma » Moon-Pearled Rose

Moon-Pearled Rose

when maple sun melts along orange ice of dusk brisk-ballet shall breathe in pale love's snowy scents for - I'm your midnight's moon-pearled rose...

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 2:58:00 AM

Back with heartfelt wishes! Congratulations. Well deserved

Debjani Mitra

Date: 10/28/2023 7:20:00 PM

Aha...what a beauty this is, Hiya your choice of words and thoughts are so powerful, Keep creating such moon pearled rosy verses.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2023 10:08:00 AM

I loved reading these beautiful lines. Congrats

Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 4:46:00 PM

Beautifully written indeed. A pleasure to read!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/22/2023 5:09:00 PM

A beautiful Tanka Hiya, love that last line it’s exquisite… Belle

Arastu Goyal

Date: 10/20/2023 7:31:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this, I like the metaphors :-) Good work!-AG

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/19/2023 4:41:00 PM

Very lovely romance! Have a sweet day lovely Hiya :-) best regards and warmest wishes, AA

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2023 2:33:00 PM

Exquisite Poem Hiya….the last line is simply beautiful! Debx

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/18/2023 9:19:00 PM

Very romantic -- love should entertain all of our senses -- color, taste, scent and spirit. Excellent poetry!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/18/2023 9:00:00 PM

Dreamy last line Hiya ...

Valsa George

Date: 10/18/2023 8:51:00 PM

I never knew a tanka can be made so beautiful. Excellent diction ! Beautiful torrent of images.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/18/2023 7:59:00 PM

This is like poetic chocolate cake so sweet and decadent in the best ways. I love the word choice...moon pearled and melting sun. Ah so good it's yummy. Lol

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/18/2023 4:26:00 PM

Your tanka is brimming with breathtaking imagery. The way you carefully choose your words and employ metaphors is truly masterful. Best of luck in the contest; your talent deserves to be recognized.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2023 9:30:00 AM

Love the imagery in your poem, maple sun melts ( I picture syrup melting over the horizon.)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2023 9:01:00 AM

Your alliteration made this a grand poem. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/18/2023 6:54:00 AM

Fabulous as always, Hiya--ornate vocabulary!

Arastu Goyal

Date: 10/18/2023 6:27:00 AM

Nice imagery, I really enjoyed reading this and the words you used here. Nice and clever write :-) -AG

Silent One

Date: 10/18/2023 5:58:00 AM

Lovely imagery in your tanka..Your selection of words and use of metaphor are very nice.. Good luck in the contest..

Ink Empress

Date: 10/18/2023 5:05:00 AM

Ive run out of enough words to describe how beautiful this tanka is my angelic star! I love the descriptive diction, the autumnal imagery and flow of your tanka. Your use of colors and that opening line too “ when maple sun melts” ahh my heart! And also how you’ve written “ pale loves snowy scent” your use of alliterations and the way you’ve paired words is impeccable! And guess wats my fave line “ im your midnight moon pearled rose” wow! Just wow! Pls set it as a prompt on insta! So i can use!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/18/2023 5:06:00 AM

Goodluck for the contest! You’ve nailed it. So heartfelt and touching this is. Fave for sure