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Mindless Chatter

Furiously the flurries fly. Attached to wall, me on phone. My Dad makes tracks, and I wonder at the dashing of snow that cools Mindless chatter. Aspiring flames leap from chimney, as wind moans.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2024 4:28:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 5:38:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Len Gasun

Date: 2/4/2024 8:09:00 PM

Gorgeious and creatively crafted sijo my dear poet friend Kim. I enjoyed reading this immensely today. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 5:38:00 AM

Thank you, Len!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 1:58:00 PM

Love the alliteration in that first phrase, Kim. Thanks for your partiicpation and congrats in my contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2024 6:58:00 PM

Thank you! This was a true story. :)

Paige Hind

Date: 1/21/2024 4:51:00 PM

LOVE this... mindless chatter took on a new personality

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2024 7:24:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/19/2024 7:05:00 AM

That's a great write. I hope you are doing great. Blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2024 8:37:00 PM

Doing fine! Thank you, sweet poet! Blessings!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/17/2024 5:46:00 PM

Very expressive, descriptive, timely piece, Kim! Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2024 6:41:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2024 12:37:00 PM

Very descriptive Sijo. I guess maybe you have had a little snow up your way. I can't imagine how hard that must be. It was 12 here this morning with windchill of 2 degrees just heavy frost and frozen birdbath. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2024 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. No snow yet but so cold. Brr

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2024 11:00:00 AM

- The wind of winter ... really moans, Kim - Creatively written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2024 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! We had a chimney fire when I was a teen.