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Meteorological Depression Haiku

Warm front then cold front Low atmospheric pressure Cloudy windy rain (Entry for "depression is a short poem" competition)

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Darren White

Date: 12/7/2016 5:38:00 AM

Wonderful and so clever! I love it. Good luck in the contest :)

Mark Martin
Date: 12/7/2016 12:47:00 PM

Thanks Darren! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2016 4:12:00 PM

great imagination for this theme. it's filling fast and right now, I got NADA

Mark Martin
Date: 12/4/2016 4:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Best of luck - funnily enough I find that ideas pop into my head when they're least expected - and most inconvenient!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/4/2016 1:57:00 PM

clever take on the theme!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2016 5:58:00 PM

ha ha ha I know Martin I live on the IOM :-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Martin
Date: 12/4/2016 2:04:00 PM

Our favourite topic of conversation in the UK! Thanks for the feedback! :-)