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Metallic Morn

Sleepy auburn hills, Wake to the warm touch of gold: Under pewter skies.

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James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 4:59:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Raul >> James

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/20/2010 7:28:00 PM

superb imagery :) i see a hillous terrein in a golden sunrise. great job.------Ell

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 4:10:00 PM

Very descriptive. It reminds me of an etheree I once did. We could have been seeing the same picture!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2010 3:10:00 PM

Good job. The scene is very clear. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/18/2010 10:31:00 AM

Nice take on the photo, TM

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/18/2010 10:27:00 AM

Love the metallic colors used. CG

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/18/2010 10:23:00 AM

Fits the photo perfectly, good job.........................Danielle

David Byrne

Date: 2/17/2010 7:59:00 PM

very metalica!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/17/2010 3:01:00 PM

Sounds so peaceful God Bless Phyl

Constance La France

Date: 2/17/2010 6:47:00 AM

You have it when it comes to this form of poetry, no one does it better.. keep your pen flowing, dear heart.... Constance

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 2/17/2010 4:51:00 AM

Beautiful Raul! Thank you so much for selecting my poem as a winner. It is an honor. Many thanks! Kelly

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2010 3:18:00 PM

I love the touch Of Sunrise..indeed,as much as i like Sunset...Warm Haiku indeed..Raul...Charma

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 7:25:00 AM

Sunrise... I got you... Well written my friend....:JP]

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2010 3:52:00 AM

another good one!

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/16/2010 2:32:00 AM

That is a nice place to live thanks Daniel