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Mecca To a Farmer's Market

A clatter of human hooves drums on through an after- dawn marketplace… the wide tunnel of mouths reel from the splintered chorus of jangled tunes bargaining and rattling papaya, arabica and sushi roll orders: a fiesta of succulent aroma whisks mid-air, talkative faces sampling potent crops on weaved baskets , hanging neatly before slurpy hands condemn them to boiling pots: the errant noise loose like gander and hogs. How much is this and that? The slithering, crumpled bills drop their tongues on purses scraped from one week’s abominable toil.. oh, darting fishes jerk their bellies while the array of chicken hunks glaze under lights, frozen and lumped from farmers’ harvest rites... morning so luscious with grapes colored velvet skin, lettuce tips pulped by shiny green: and the procession of lapping mouths reach head tone pitch, dishes, dishes for salivating tongues, taste buds for citrusy fruits, on one delirious mecca to a market, market day! ...................... A Poem You Enjoyed Contest of Lewis Raynes Entered 9/13/2016 (Old Poem)

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Date: 9/1/2014 6:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Fantastic descriptions and images. Our farmer's markets here pale in comparison to this.
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:52:00 PM
Excellent descriptions! Congratulationson your win!!!
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 8/29/2014 10:55:00 PM
Ooops... "congratulations"... :-)
Date: 8/29/2014 9:54:00 PM
wow, what a descriptive poem for market day. This is glorious, Nette. BIG congrats to you in this contest.
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:10:00 PM
Nette, I love your description; it brought back an open air market we visited in Mexico. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:54:00 PM
Nicely written Nette. Congratulations on your top placement. Verlena
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:12:00 PM
I can almost hear the clatter of this busy market place; excellent descriptions and imagery, unusual use of language, as always - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:47:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2014 6:25:00 AM
Excellent. A vivid write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 8/25/2014 3:28:00 AM
incredible imagery Nette you painted a stunning picture of the in my head:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/24/2014 2:50:00 PM
Vivid poem! enjoyed the read Nettie :)
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Date: 8/24/2014 2:03:00 PM
All the senses are alive in a market. You allow me to feel the colours, the scenes , flavors and just let me be there, Nette. Delightful poem from you!
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Date: 8/24/2014 1:29:00 PM
- I love going to the market - we have non market in Norway - But "we" have in Turkey - Exciting smells ..... buy things I do not really need :))) - Enjoy reading, dear Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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