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Maybe Baby

series 5/5/3/3/5 Limerick On precept Palin Concepts are wailing Concepts spoofs Love is truth Corporate failing Amidst the wailing Her ship keeps sailing Precept’s truths She’s no goof Beliefs are sailing Her precept is right May need to try it Now maybe Sweet Baby She abodes in light!! At least she confesses tunnel’s light!!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2011 10:39:00 PM

I don't know how you get this from seeing her. But anyway, I do enjoy the cute way you wrote this poem. It is crazy how people can see one person in a completely different "light" it would be nice if you were right about her! Luv, andrea

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 2/8/2011 8:52:00 AM

this is a good one you have here

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 11:55:00 AM

I guess you do know Huckabee better than I do, John. I've seen his TV show and like the way he treats others with respect and kindness. I just haven't seen "precept" vision in Sarah yet. She's a pretty lady with a sense of humor I admire. And I don't think she's "dumb" at all, just not as educated on world affairs as some others, but she can always learn that. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 11:01:00 AM

I know you truly believe this about Sarah, John. The images politicians present are so distorted from their realities that I don't know whom to believe anymore. Perhaps you can tell me why you feel so strongly about Palin. For me, Huckabee seems the most truthful. And, of course, Jimmy Carter was one of my favorite, truthful politicians who seemed governed by precepts rather than concepts. Please continue to enlighten. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2011 4:24:00 AM

a witty rant on Palin; so cleverly written for current nees bits, john! :) hugggs, nette